|Reviews for Dragon Ball Rewritten, Gohan's Time Warp Chaos|
| lilmymyshem chapter 30 . 3/13
please update this story rocks
| SSJ1Gohan chapter 30 . 2/26
Nice chapter, and a very original plot to a cliche idea. Though I have two questions.
1. Will you update this after you finish, "My Brother's a Ghost," and "Child of Mew 2?"
2. Have you ever watched Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood? It's a really good anime that (if you haven't watched it) you should try!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Hi im the guest that reviewed in chapter 22. what I meant by goku and gohans cute but odd relationship is how goku feels fatherly and protective over gohan but is 1 year younger than gohan so gohan find it odd. thank you :).
| blaziebla chapter 30 . 2/3
Aww, that's it for now? Well, I guess I should be grateful; this gives me time to write and look elsewhere for a while. Then I can come back and read through all the chapters I missed again!
I bet that fox's name is Bobby *shot* NO NO WAIT IT'S DELPHOX *shot again* Fiiiine...
Awaiting the naming of the shrew— I mean, further update!
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/20
I really liked the chapters that focused on kid Gokus and gohans cute but kind of odd relationship can you please do more chapters like those.
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/20
I love this story but I wish goku remembered who gohan really was
| blaziebla chapter 17 . 1/18
Oh, let me guess: Kit and her clan were attacked by a future Gohan fused with a future Kit (more or less), who went back to the past to use their prophesied power to destroy the clan, spurring Kit to go find Gohan like she did in the future Gohan and Kit's timeline so they could save the world with their prophesied power and then destroy Kit's clan all over again. ... Wow, that was a mouthful. But did my guess make sense?
| blaziebla chapter 13 . 1/16
KIT IS SECRETLY ATHENA CYKES *shot* ... what, I can't make Phoenix Wright references? If you haven't played Phoenix Wright: Dual Destinies (which you totally should! The M rating is for blood, though there's one pretty blatant innuendo in there), the tidbit about the difference in Kit's personality from past to present reminded me of Athena Cykes, one of the new characters in the franchise.
And that Final Crystal Kamehameha has a very nice acronym.
Aw, don't tell us it's foreshadowing! It ruins the surprise ;)
*moves on to next chapter*
| blaziebla chapter 12 . 1/16
Uh. Word of advice: don't use "wet dream" in reference to urinating while asleep. It, uh... means something ENTIRELY different, which you may or may not know about depending on your age.
Don't tell me, don't tell me: DISTORTA IS THE TACO BELL DOG.
. no? Ok then xD
*goes to next chapter*
| TheFanFicReader chapter 9 . 1/3
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Cool story side note i have a. favor. to ask could you wright a birdy the mighty fan fic there. are so few and you. could make a beter story than the ova and new er. One and from what iv read u are a. great. Wrighter. so i ask if u could please wright one sinserly a fan of a fan fic
| Blazingnyancat chapter 6 . 12/23/2013
I didn't get to finish this chapter fully im on finding a way its really good though!
| Blazingnyancat chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Wow-OMG THIS IS MY FAV DBZ STORY!
| Crystalzap chapter 30 . 10/8/2013
...you have a very creative mind
| emy9941 chapter 30 . 9/26/2013
Wow I really like where this story is going so far. The plot and the characters just keep my attention and make me want more. Keep up the good work! :)