|Reviews for Centrefold|
| Chiqs chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Cool story, different way for Bella and Edward meet in the 80's! Don't know if you truly captured the era, but its cute!
| TineSoes chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Wow.. I really liked it! it would be awesome if u would continue it afterwards.. über nice story, really!
| AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
| LustforEdward chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Loved it so, so MUCH!
Please continue this story after the competition is over - I want to see what happens to my favourite couple and I also want to see Jakes magazine fail!
| EdwardsWinterWarmer chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Oh my gosh!
I NEVER review or anything - just read - but you have made me create an accoutn just so I can review this for you!
I loved everything about this story. Firstly - it fit the song perfectly - the lyrics were spelt out right there in what you wrote. I would have guessed the song even if you hadn't told us at the beginning.
She was pure like snowflakes
no one could ever stain
The memory of my angel
Could never cause me pain
Year go by I'm looking through a girly magazine
And there's my homeroom angel on the pages inbetween
My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centrefold
Angel is the centrefold
Amazing, completely amazing. And as for Jake and James - urgh! So glad that Edward punched him. I loved the bit where he split the bag of peas that was numbing his hand.
Also loved that he was sensible to use protection - so key to the time when there was so much fear about AIDS.
You have my vote and I seriously hope you win - I'm gonna let everyone know about this gem of a story. I am also looking forward to finding out who you are so I can read all your other stories (hopefully there are loads - but if not then I will add you to my author alerts in the hope of future stories.)
Good luck with everything
| Credoroza chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I liked this story. Very dark and seedy, so 80's! Huge surprise about Bella's previous life but definitely made sense in the story. Nice one shot.
| Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Can I buy a vowel - cos I'm speechless. Omg! I loved it! Haha. This was great, I love the entire storyline of it, it had a total Hugh Hefner feel to it.. but BEFORE he had all the centerfold girlfriends! I love that Bella just disappeared & then reappeared 7yrs later as a centerfold model. Great read! Loved it.
| HollBeth chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Oh, this was brilliant. I absolutely adored every, single word!
Angel WAS a centrefold...now she's the center of his universe. Lovely!
| katmom chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
So glad they found each other!
And I hope Jake's magazine fails...!
Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!
| gabby871 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
great story. i loved it!
| FlubFlub chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Great story! I usually dont review, but i wanted you to know that you did a great job :)
| tawelephant chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
That was hot.