Reviews for Just Come Back To Me Please
DreigoththeVampireGod chapter 4 . 9/22/2016
Mrs doubtfire
mxcalibur chapter 4 . 3/29/2016
Mrs. Doubtfire
Guest chapter 8 . 3/11/2016
More please this is getting good. Please don't stop this story.
draco7347 chapter 8 . 11/12/2015
love story cant wait till new chapters
AkiraNatsume chapter 8 . 3/13/2015
More chapters please?
god of all chapter 8 . 2/21/2015
great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Mukuro234 chapter 8 . 12/14/2014
XD hehe this is great loved it
desdelor97 chapter 8 . 10/23/2014
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.
bella.beau.14 chapter 8 . 10/12/2014
update soon please its getting good
Fairy Princess Yuugi chapter 8 . 3/12/2014
nice cant wait for next update
Guest chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
first time reading this also was a good movie but flubber is better
Guest chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
i like it i want them to have childen.
chrysanths chapter 5 . 3/2/2013
Go screw yourself Draco. Harry already died, why does he NEED to return and fight in a war in which he already suffered an ultimate penalty in? ...

This isn't even going into the subject of ... "Sent to bring you back to England". Who made that order? He really was dead. Go screw yourself England.

Actually... This is confusing. Parts of this plot consist of "I know nothing, what is this?" reactions, and "I know who Aizen-teme is, what happened?". It's very inconsistent in backstory and how the HP section of the universe is different from cannon but you just sorta ran right through all this.

If Draco and Hermione were looking for an unidentified wizard in Japan to join the cause... They'd have to have gone through legal channels. Did their superiors (better not be Dumbledore) not tell them who they were visiting but knew themselves? Did they not know but use the duo as a precaution? Are they going to Japan on their own free time? Was it the suspicion of Harry or was it to see Orihime (who presumably they had never met prior to now)?

...who really knew that Harry was alive before this meeting? Anyone with a bit of common sense would question the heck out of them for more information / to provide explanation of subplot-backstory.
Reishin Amara chapter 8 . 2/25/2013 bad.a bit more balanced than your other stories because they have a manageable number of threats for once.
Starcrossedmoon chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
interesting! but if it was only a year int he humin world i do not remember if the hollow world gos by faster if not haow was harry there so long
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