|Reviews for Silver Lining|
| gawwd chapter 18 . 3/9
Love it! I really do like how you showed the best sides of Slytherin.
| HerosnMira chapter 18 . 2/3
I would love to see you update Silver Lining more it is one of my most favorite stories in Fan Fiction.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
This seems like an excellent idea, I really like it. A critique for you - take your time developing characters. Don't go too fast. In this story particularly, you develop the relationship between Harry/Silver and Snape very abruptly. I think it makes good sense that Snape might have difficulty associating Silver the cat with Harry the boy which would make the living arrangements easier, and/or that he would find it easier to tolerate Harry's presence by compartmentalizing (i.e. being able to mostly pretend that Silver is just his familiar and put his animosity on the back burner). That all is well done. What you did a bit too quickly was the development of /affection/ between the two. Also, Snape seems a bit OOC with all the smiling, especially in public. With a character like this, it might do better to start behind closed doors, then in more open surroundings.
This doesn't mean you have to spend chapters doing it though! When you skip ahead to the opening feast you could drop hints and things such as, 'they'd soon grown more comfortable in each other's presence during the summer, but now in front of all the students it was difficult to relax' (if you wanted to go that rout). It compares what already happened to the present. There are other ways to do these things, that's just how I typically do it.
Anyway, sorry to go on and on, I look forward to the next 17 chapters. )
| ShyGirl100 chapter 18 . 1/18
Is the story going to have Dumbledore bashing ie are Harry and Severus just going to dislike Dumbledore and try to stay away from him? Is Harry going to fight in the war? When are his friends going to fund out about Harry? Are they going to find out at all?
| Sithtar chapter 18 . 1/17
I have no problem with sporadic updates just so long as there are updates. :D
I hope Marina doesn't set her sights on Severus. While possibly interesting, I can't imagine Blaise trusting her that Severus is just going to be another for her 'hobby' and I think Blaise likes Severus too much for that. After all for 9 almost 10 months of the year since they are 11, Severus has been the closes thing to a Father-figure that many of the Slytherin students have. While Blaise may have kept himself from getting to close, I'm sure there is some bonds there. And now that Blaise is with Harry, he really wouldn't want anything to happen to Severus.
| xDarklightx chapter 18 . 1/15
I can't wait to read more.
| Elizaveta Hedervary chapter 18 . 1/14
I'm loving the Silver/Harry part of the story. I haven't seen any fanfics like it.
| Turtle Girl 52 chapter 18 . 1/14
Love the update! I'm so glad that Harry is out of Hogwarts (and away from Dumbles). I think it will definitely help him. I can't wait to read more about his summer with Blaise!
| blackangel150 chapter 18 . 1/13
What is she up to
| Odosnape chapter 18 . 1/13
Very interesting, I really like this story.
| domsijohn chapter 18 . 1/13
i say what ever works for you if its one story at time or several i also hope that albus doesn't take harry away from his new family and why hasn't ron and herimne or sirius and remus done anything to see or harry
| Albionia chapter 18 . 1/13
Awww, great, really, really good.
| emthereble chapter 18 . 1/13
i love fluff and this fanfic !
| Angel JJK chapter 18 . 1/13
Sweet holiday. Til next time.
| Raven Lockwood chapter 18 . 1/12
At the moment I'm only reading this one, but I don't really care how you do updates as long as you do them. :p ... Whatever works best for you will work fine for me. :)