|Reviews for Bleach:Zanpakuto Rebellion Twin Blades of the Moon|
| lunaatje123 chapter 13 . 2/27
Thank you for the story!
It was an enjoyable read, if a little rough around the edges.
Since this story is already quite old, you might already have improved on the points of feedback I'm going to mention, if so, just ignore them.
It seemed like you had a fairly good idea of what you wanted your story to be about, but then suddenly came up with new things to add and did so, without really motivating the character's new actions very well. The most clear example of what I mean is that you never had a scene where Shuryo spend time or got close with any zanpakutou beside Hyorinmaru, but when she died suddenly all other zanpakutou, especially Sogyo no Kotowari, acted like they had actually become very close. It would have made more sense for them to act like that if you had written some scenes earlier in your story to establish those friendships.
Still, like I said, overall it was nicely done.
| yokishko chapter 8 . 8/12/2014
Just wanted to point out that the lyrics for "kono yo no uta" have the wrong romaji...
| Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahah chapter 13 . 7/9/2014
Their so cute!
| TiffBaby101 chapter 13 . 4/20/2014
awwwwwwwwwwww. this was so awesome
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/31/2014
I like your story but I think that the battle went way to quickly and it seemed like kenpachi defeated her too easily.
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