Reviews for Disenchanted
jk chapter 11 . 9/26/2015
what the fuck did he promise Tanya? when he left he castle he said it was time to move on and he was going to find Tanya?
is he gonna hook up with her? he said she was stunning...eww by the way

is he giving her a home in the castle that was his sisters/. what the fuck is going on?
jk chapter 10 . 9/26/2015
hahahah bellas so pathetic! he fucking sent you away and you come back with your friends? who does that?

if I kicked a guy out id be fucking pissed if he came back ! just sayin!

why does she have to beg for his love? ya know what I'm fucking done with this bullshit!

I hate the plot and the characters but it was written well, the flow was good and the grammar ect..
jk chapter 9 . 9/26/2015
lol Edwards a douche bag!
bella should just be with jake I don't mean to be cruel but shes about to inherit a home and she needs to take care of it!
Edward can go fuck himself
jk chapter 7 . 9/26/2015
can you make bella more pathetic?

first off she all of a sudden loves Edward though theres nothing there to love and if freakin came out of nowhere...stupid

now shes begging the prick to stay...BEGGING...why? he wants you to leave bella have some fucking self respect and leave with alittle dignity!
jk chapter 6 . 9/26/2015
and there it is! bella should leave seriously eddie has a lot of baggage ...TOO MUCH BAGGAGE
jk chapter 5 . 9/26/2015
I HATED THIS CHAPTER!

I don't understand why bella couldn't just walk back to the house like a fucking normal person

I don't understand why she wants to stay with assward...she should go back to Jacob!

I hate that Edward was married before and I hate that he loved her

I hate that Edwards used up

I hate that bella has to settle for this bullshit

I hate that bella likes him...I really hate that
I was embarrassed for her when she begged him to stay...when a man wants to send you away you don't beg to stay...you never NEVER beg...if that's what he wants you act like you don't give a fuck, like you want that to! WIN THE BREAKUP
jk chapter 4 . 9/26/2015
if he feels guilty for touching another woman other then his dead wife then why in the fuck is he making bella sleep naked like a creep?

seriously hes fucking creepy...I will not touch you but I expect to see all of you! I will cry like a little bitch if you touch me but I expect you to be naked!

seriously? I hate this Edward...we should kill him off

bella and jake for this story!
jk chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
ewww Edward has fucking kids! hes all used up!

Charlie should have let bella be with jake!
he gives her to someone with all that fucking baggage just cause he has money? his dead wifes money? fuck that
Guest chapter 15 . 9/2/2014
Love love loved this story! You have written so well (only thing: new vs knew but no biggie!)

Thanks for writing this for us all to enjoy! xx
holnico chapter 15 . 8/27/2014
i just feel that in the end the story felt rushed it could of been drawn out more, but good story none the less
artri chapter 15 . 7/24/2014
A most enjoyable story.
artri chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
:):)
artri chapter 6 . 7/24/2014
:)
debslmac chapter 15 . 3/25/2014
loved this story :)
MatingInspires chapter 15 . 12/29/2013
Enjoyed this very much
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