Reviews for Starcrossed
elusiveauthoress15 chapter 2 . 7/16/2016
This sounds really cool, just after reading the first two chapters. I recognised the parallels between the story and the play immediately (I had to study R&J), and I liked the appropriate adaptations of the "but new struck nine" and "do you bite your thumb at me?" scenes. Really well-written too, good job!
Guest chapter 10 . 2/20/2014
obsessivegirl73 chapter 10 . 4/2/2012
Aww it's over already? D: awww. :( lol/snort at the ending though, that was ridiculously cheesy. Loved the story. :) you did an awesome job with it. Great work! XD
obsessivegirl73 chapter 9 . 2/14/2012
Much better chapter. XD

I like how you're changing all the running away/deaths and everything to fit. It's perfect, I love it. :D and it's so humorous. Awesome job, looking forward to more! D
obsessivegirl73 chapter 8 . 2/14/2012
...I...thought you were joking about the songfic...noooo! D: ;) well, that wasn't a very exciting chapter. Better one next time por favor? Please? Please? Pretty please? XD
obsessivegirl73 chapter 7 . 1/15/2012
...what? Lol. XD

Poor Scorpius. :( the victim of cruel house favoritism, more or less. Lol. Great chapter. Looking forward to more! :D
obsessivegirl73 chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
Don't worry, it made sense. XD I laughed really hard at James telling Al he didn't have to fight and Al persisted. And at Scorp pulling the actual R&J text lol. Love this story, looking forward to more! :D
obsessivegirl73 chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
Yeah, that chapter was a little pointless...oh well, whatever. XP looking forward to more! :D
Guest chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
"Hello, please write another chapter as I am following your story" or "NU CAHPTER PLS‼" or "hi" or "lol" or "2" or "Yes I think Gnomeo and Juliet should have ended there too" or "TO PIGFARTS‼ RUMBLEROAR‼" or any other combination of characters and spaces.
obsessivegirl73 chapter 4 . 11/18/2011
To Pigfarts! Rumbleroar! XD actually, how about we go to Bug planet? And be STARSHIP RANGERS! :D haha.

I love crossovers like this. :) I think I'm going to do a Midsummer version actually. Hee hee. Awesome job, love how you're translating everything. Looking forward to more! D
Sonic Bananas Are Cool chapter 3 . 11/12/2011
I feel like a stalky reviewer. MUAHAHAHA! So anyways... just wanted to say that it's going really awesomely. All the characters are exactly as I imagine them! Scorpius is nice, but sarcastic and kinda overdramatic. Rose is sweet and kind. Lily is a social butterfly and James is the popular party-er and he kinda seems like he could be a prankster. Everyone's just so perfect!

It really feels like a crossover. Story of Shakespeare with personality of ScoRose.
Sonic Bananas Are Cool chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Yes! I was worried that it would still have the whole Shakespearean text, but Yippee! no it doesn't! And nice job changing the thumb biting part. I found it as funny as I do the original xD
Sonic Bananas Are Cool chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
ScoRose Romeo and Juliet with a happy ending? Seems good. Love the last line, "Shakespeare will give way to Taylor Swift" xD