Reviews for Crossing Lines
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
*Sigh*! What perfect firsts for your boys... first kisses, first "love you's", and first time making love! Ugh!
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 3 . 7/9/2013
Mmmmmmm... That was hot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
harrytwifan chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
Excellent. Very interesting.
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
Hot hot hot!
Nancy
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Awe... Jasper seems so sweet, as does Edward! Their friendship is growing, can't wait to see how it blossoms into more!

I'm sure I'll enjoy the rest of their story!
harrytwifan chapter 8 . 7/9/2013
Omg. Sobbing here! Beautiful and fitting end to a beautiful love story. Thank you for sharing.
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
The proposal and the wedding - both beautiful. Wonderful job!
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
No, not too easy. I actually love the way you've written the time jumps throughout the entire story. And if Jaxper stayed celibate the whole time, living the musician s life, he was always going to forgive Edward. Wonderfully emotional and well written chapter.
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
Awwwwww. Yeah, poor Ed was being unreasonable. Onward to read more!
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Wow is right! That was truly beautiful writing. Your description of their first kiss was amazing.
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 3 . 7/9/2013
Another great chapter. Very realistic. Loved it!
Nancy
harrytwifan chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Wonderful. I loved that line!
Nancy
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Love sweet Jasper sticking up for Edward! Good beginning!
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Why have I not read this? No idea, but I'm glad to have found the rec in my Facebook group. Great start!
Nancy
Leona Bowman chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
I loved the this chapter.. please write more stories of E/J. they are my favorit..

hugs Leona
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