Reviews for Crossing Lines
sasharose11 chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
I enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
sasharose11 chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Good to see they had a nice long happy life together.
sasharose11 chapter 7 . 7/5/2013
Happy to see things working so well for them. Sweet chapter.
sasharose11 chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
Jasper gave in too easily after all those years of hurt and anger. I can't believe how long it took for Edward to realize how childish and selfish he was.
sasharose11 chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
Edward kind of deserved that. While I understand how he's feeling, it was incredibly selfish. It seems like he needs this time to learn how to be on his own.
sasharose11 chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
Sweet chapter.
sasharose11 chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
I wonder, are they going to ignore what happened for a while?
sasharose11 chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Nice welcome to the neighborhood. Poor kid.
Mych0ice chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
Great outtake!
chippy73 chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
I'm really liking this line crossing thing. Wonder which line they're going to cross next? :)
beanothercullen chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
That was sooo good! Loved hearing Jaspers side of it. I'm going to miss these guys, hopefully you do another outtake at some point, thanks
beanothercullen chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
DAMN that was hot! I hate that I'm almost done, great job
beanothercullen chapter 8 . 7/1/2013
GIRL that totally made me cry hahaha, awww that was just the best! great job
beanothercullen chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
Great job, that was so sweet, I loved the mixing of the sand. So perfect for them. And seeing Edward look to the future of them watching their own kids marry, so good!
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