Reviews for Our First Kiss
JustAnotherTypicalBastard chapter 7 . 5/15/2016
This story is brilliant.
TeenT1tanD1sneyFan chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
You know you're not allowd to use Lil-Tofu, Paine, or Mudo in this fanfiction, Right? Pi said that she won't allow people to use them in fanfics... She said so there's proof in her journals... (Its called "Frequently asked questions about 'COBT' " and she says so on question 12.)
kiahwinkler chapter 7 . 11/18/2015
I loved this story!
naruto chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
Dude add more to it and next time do one on the kid dude they are 12'14 and 5
naruto chapter 3 . 8/15/2014
Murdoc and paine are two years of age and lilith is five year younger
AnneSilverfire chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
Bravo darling, it was a good story :). There were some random issues with verb tenses and wording here or there, but that's nothing to worry about, that's more a BETAs job anyway. The stories were cute and I like that in the end you don't realllly know what the story was :). Cute twist. Got any more questions or if you want my opinion on anything just feel free to ask :)
onominous chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
Really really really goood!no fantstic.(no thats to low)uh...exzilerating!(think thats how u spell it)lets just say i loved it and i am about to read the sequal!cant wait
HeirOfVoid chapter 7 . 2/23/2012
Great story, but if they didn't go bowling, what DID they do?
just chillin.killin chapter 7 . 1/1/2012
I dont know what to say. It was a good story. Not as romantic as most, but more realistic.
just chillin.killin chapter 6 . 1/1/2012
I would love to have a ring with that type of jewel.
just chillin.killin chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Im betting they dont kiss yet.
just chillin.killin chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
Is Raven going to finish?
just chillin.killin chapter 3 . 1/1/2012
Like How I Met Your Mother episode 'nothing good happens at 3AM.
just chillin.killin chapter 2 . 1/1/2012
A little like How I Met Your Mother.
just chillin.killin chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
How did they have kids?
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