Reviews for Our First Kiss
naruto chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
Dude add more to it and next time do one on the kid dude they are 12'14 and 5
naruto chapter 3 . 8/15/2014
Murdoc and paine are two years of age and lilith is five year younger
AnneSilverfire chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
Bravo darling, it was a good story :). There were some random issues with verb tenses and wording here or there, but that's nothing to worry about, that's more a BETAs job anyway. The stories were cute and I like that in the end you don't realllly know what the story was :). Cute twist. Got any more questions or if you want my opinion on anything just feel free to ask :)
onominous chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
Really really really goood!no fantstic.(no thats to low)uh...exzilerating!(think thats how u spell it)lets just say i loved it and i am about to read the sequal!cant wait
HeirOfVoid chapter 7 . 2/23/2012
Great story, but if they didn't go bowling, what DID they do?
just chillin.killin chapter 7 . 1/1/2012
I dont know what to say. It was a good story. Not as romantic as most, but more realistic.
just chillin.killin chapter 6 . 1/1/2012
I would love to have a ring with that type of jewel.
just chillin.killin chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Im betting they dont kiss yet.
just chillin.killin chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
Is Raven going to finish?
just chillin.killin chapter 3 . 1/1/2012
Like How I Met Your Mother episode 'nothing good happens at 3AM.
just chillin.killin chapter 2 . 1/1/2012
A little like How I Met Your Mother.
just chillin.killin chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
How did they have kids?
aslan333 chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
good story
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
It's alwasy the husband's fault ... even when it's not.
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
It would have been funny had Cyborg come around the corner and hit them with a stankball right when they were kissing. But even he knows better than to do THAT! He would have taken a picture and blackmailed them instead!
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