Reviews for A Good Boy
KylaHirawani chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
This story would of been good if Bella was his first not Tanya ewwww
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
She's pathetic. She kept her virginity for him, in the same time he screw around. She knew it and she still stayed celibate and pure for him. And then she told him she's glad she wasn't his first... Are you fucking kidding me?
I would prefer to lose my virginity with a friend, someone I like and trust and respect, than to wait for a guy who did this to me.
God I regret I read it.
I need some Disney.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Wow, this Edward was a huge asshole IMO.

She was his doormat all the way through.
bonz245 chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Loved this story.
LolitaLovegoddess chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Asweet story, thanks!
garddita17 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Wow. At first heartbreaking and then just amazing. And the way you used the lyrics to move the story, so good. I really enjoyed this one, even if Edward was a bit thick in the beginning. I guess he just needed to grow up a bit to see what was always there in front of him...Bella.
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
's killing me to know why Alice was acting the way she she like Edward? Or did she maybe think he was going to lead her on again?
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Wow! He was an idiot! Glad he fixed things
HollBeth chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Gah, my lonely, inner-teenager heart ached when he told her about Tanya...

This was really well-written and also seemed completely believable. I thoroughly enjoyed your story!
Sunshine72 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I like it!
katmom chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
They certainly were crazy for each other!

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