|Reviews for Sin of the Rose|
| Rixe Rhapsodos chapter 1 . 8/5
Hello again! This one was cute at the end, just plain adorable! I also loved how you portrayed Marluxia's pain. Good going!
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Aww, that's so sweet. The mentions of their previous relationship is cute as well as their meeting at the end. How cute that Vexen secretly likes the roses. And super aww at the hug there at the end. So sweet!
Yuffie is hilarious here as well as Marluxia's reactions. "Keep me?" he asked as he tried to push the girl away. "I am not a pet." That whole scene is well written.
Good job writing the scene between Marly and Cloud. Cloud is so much in character. It's nice that he was able to help Marluxia during his depressed moments while still being himself.
Again, the ending is adorable.
Wonderful work with this story.
| HikariFighter chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Oh my gooood, finally done with writing two (TWO!) freaking long essays for school *dies*
Now, let's see what I missed :D
I really liked this one! It's so sad and just heart-breaking. I mean, poor Marly! D:
But then the ending was so perfect. At the end, I looked like this :3
Really awesomely written, and I really can't wait until the others!