Finish this or take it down.

You’re probably not seeing my remarks since it has been so many years since you posted this. I was late coming to ROGAN fanfiction because I was soooo late coming to the Gilmore Girls series in reruns. I fell uncontrollably in fascination with the Rory and Logan coupling played so convincingly by Bledel and Czuchry. The series finale was so terribly wrong and then the horrible AYITL left me feeling there had to be more to their iconic love story. Since your story here predated the reunion, it provides a great alternative to both.

If your intent with this chapter was to make your reader cry, you succeeded with me! Rory and Logan FINALLY together again and REALLY talking. Fantastic dialogue ️

So true to Rory’s relationship with her mom that she calls Lorelai for wardrobe advice. Finn is his usual eccentric character never a dull moment in his rhetoric! Nice job on the plane narrative.

I love Paris! Great dialogue between her and Rory as so in character for their relationship. So was Rory and her mom. Fun and yet serious with Rory knowing that Lorelai will support her decisions regarding Logan. This is a great story and I may have to binge it!

Actually, I read another story about Logan’s fight with a cancer but I cannot recall the author or the title. It was one of the most beautifully written fan fictions that I have read. It has a super sad ending and I never want to read it again although a sequel would be interesting. I applaud your courage to undertake such a sensitive and emotional subject. You are doing a terrific job of conveying everyone’s immediate horror and shock at the diagnosis. Excellent and topical subject which is unfortunately happening to many people on a daily basis. I’m def following this!

Rory why should he use you as a emotional support after you ripped out his heart if I was him I would not let you in after you fucked with my emotions and made me feel that I’m not important to you that I was only ever gonna be in the way of your wipe ope career opportunities that you loved more then me then when you only wanted a never ending casual fuck buddy relationship with no guarantee of more I would have walked and make sure if your my friends you would never be talked again and if they were my friends they would not have anything to do with you

Of course he hurt your feelings cuz he did not want to be your never ending casual fuck buddy and was not willing to waist 50 years for you to maybe want a life with after your fucking career was over

Rory your cunt of a mother never gave Logan a chance before she decided she hates him and she was glad you chose your career over him cuz she made you believe that all people from that world were bad and that all you need is her and your career and now that he’s sick you decide that you finally give a fuck about him you did not give a fuck about him while you told him he was holding you back you did not give a fuck when you offered a never ending casual fuck buddy relationship with no guarantee of anything more , you did not give a fuck about him so why now are you acting like you give a fuck about him you treated him like shit and expect him to waist 50 years before you decide to settle down with him or until you find some other fucker to fuck around with just like you fucked around with Jess behind Logan back

Now you fucking care about him , you should just stay away and focus on your career that you love more then him and you don’t deserve a chance to fucking rip out his heart again

Rory you did make a mistake you should have talked to Logan that you had a fear of being a trophy wife if you married him and let him tell you that he wanted you to work and have your dream he wanted you to use California as your home base I between jobs and Rory you could have had a long engagement but you claim to love him but you dod not cuz if you loved him you should have talked to him instead of a pro / con list then choose your fucking career over him and told him he’s in the way of your career and that you would only offer him a never ending casual fuck buddy relationship with no guarantee of anything more and if you had it your way bitch you would make him wait 50 fucking years to marry cuz you only give a fuck about your career not him

Oh no. I found this story so late. I’m sure your probably not going to finish or update but I hope you do one day. Your writing is extraordinary and the story is soo good. The continuous conversation of the future for both Logan and Rory. The raw feelings put out there. Lorelai being supportive. Finn being the one to bring Rory. It’s all soooo good !

Bloody hell this fic has seriously wrecked me. Ugly crying

Thanks for taking the time to write this awesomeness

no what you wanted was to fuck around with his emotions making seam you care but you did not want a future with him more then a causal fuck buddy cuz bitch that what you call a never ending long distance relationship you did not want a future with him cuz if you did you would not have said no you wanted your wide open future that did not include him more then a quick fuck here and there what kind of relationship is that there nothing there to hold on to

rory i dont thing you loved him in the first place if you did you would not have sayed no and you would not have let him walk away from you