|Reviews for Sweeter Than Honey|
| valonqars chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
This was beautifully written, wow. Favorited! :)
| aradiaeva chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Great fic. Sweet and sexy and a great blend if emotions and need.
| todokichan chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
you write some of the best smut i have read. braVO *slow claps*
| sophia-always chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Very nice! I like how it all came together in the end with the honey motif - and I love them together!
| DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Well, that was thoroughly enjoyable. My goodness, you write some extremely incredible erotica. Amazing. I'm so glad you've written so many Dany & Jorah stories, haha. I like it. yeeees, I like it a lot.
Gonna keep reading more of your stories now, haha. You are a very talented writer. I'm so glad I found you!
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
"You would have had the slaver's filthy tongue for such insolence," Dany said, skirting the always divisive subject of Arstan Whitebeard altogether. She prized the plate from Jorah's hands, lest he break it in twain with his grasp. "Or hewn off his entire head, to ensure he did not so much as have another disrespectful thought about me. And then who would sell me the army I require for my conquest?"
yeah, thats probably true. ;)
"Her mouth opened in a silent oh as she realized she must have, in her naïveté, stumbled onto a bit of innuendo which she did not fully understand"
Shes still a bit..different from the Dany in the other stories I read from you. ;) there she is already strong and more..sure of herself but I also adore her how she is here.
"I love you, Daenerys. My queen. And once I have given my heart, I do not take it back."
I think it is very sweet of him to tell her that. Not only that he would be even more loyal to her then but also that he would want to truly be with her then, if she really doesnt stop. :)
And the things they always say here about the bear and honey and everything..Brilliant, haha..! ;)
How she described the differences between Jorah and Drogo. Or the whole part about submission.. Wow, that was..wonderful and it really made much sense!
| Laine Montgomery chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
This is fabulous. Sexy, sweet, in-character- and Dany/Jorah is such a drastically underrated pairing. Also, I love your prose style; it flows beautifully. Thank you for sharing!
| Eirwynn chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed the idea of Jorah and Dany so I'm thankful you wrote this I thought the characters were really true to the books and that Dany displayed her characteristic "queenliness" mixed with her relative innocence. Jorah was not very developed as a character in this story but it wasn't really necessary at all. I liked the way the story was told mostly from Dany's perspective. If you wanted to add, putting in more of Jorah's thoughts would be really interesting to see. Thanks again! Keep writing!
| miya chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Too sweet for my taste. I like your writing style though.
| AnimeWrestlingDonuts chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
I demand that GRRM rewrites this into A Storm of Swords :D
Great read, I will be favoriting.
| ladyvader99 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
i love jorah x dany in ways i can't even begin to say, and i'm SO SO SO SO pleased you wrote one 3 3 3
| DeadRabbit92 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
great job. i don't generally ship danyXjorah but i like what you did with them.