Reviews for Chronicles
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 12/20/2013
Yaaay you finally updated this story again! So they're finally going on a journey. I'm really curious whay Poli meant with the event surrounding Red's dad. Did something happened to him, like with Tida's dad in FFX? (I got too used with his Japanese name, so i use Tida instead of Tidus)

And I ask again, does magic exist in Red's world, because I wouldn't be surprised if Yellow turns out to be a healer class.
The defender of pokespe chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
OMG OMG OMG PEARL PEARL PEARL I WANNA SEE WHAT YOURE GONNA DO WITH PEARLY PFFFFFTTTRR I SWEAR YOURE SO DEAD FROM HERE ON, IM SO GONNA READ ALLLLLLL YOUR FICS AND SPAN YOU WITH REVEIWS AN STUFF XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I hope you did well with Pearl... I am in love with da dude... *prays hard*
Dia Newman chapter 5 . 7/13/2013
WHAT THE BLOODY- PLEASE UPDATE!
yellowseason chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Ending wasn't sloppy at all! So far, it's a nice story with Red and Yellow, and I can't wait to see when the other Dexholders come into play (which I'm assuming after reading the story's flavor text). The action scenes are so vividly written, I can practically see and hear them.
yellowseason chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Whoa...from the first chapter, I wasn't expecting such a transition to a high-tech, futuristic, almost sci-fi environment, but this really sets a feel that anything can happen in this story. Nice! And Yellow! How could you possibly think such ill thoughts about yourself?
yellowseason chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Hey! Well, I think I gotta start off by saying I found you through your sister Topaz, whom I must admit I am a huge fan of. And while I love her emotionally depressing style, I don't just look at the genre of the writing...if it's good, then it's good. And this is amazing! I love the amount of detail you put in! And I love Maplestory too! Is Red's hometown based on Perion? That's kinda the impression I got. Anyways...awesome beginning...so much potential with this story.
asdfghjkl chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
I like this story! Mind if you continue it? more updates?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
I can't believe I didn't noticed this chapter was up. Anyway I liked it, too bad for Red that his master died and that his hometown is in complete ruin. But at least he's still in one piece. I was quite surprised that Yellow fights with swords, I thought she'd use someone like a spear or a stave. Anyway too bad that it will take a while for the next chapter, but I'll be waiting patiently for it.
Oh and I wanted to know, do they also use magic in the story?
Mai Mai123 chapter 5 . 12/6/2012
LOVE IT! can't wait to read more!
riolupika33 chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
What a great story.
Yami no Paladin chapter 5 . 11/16/2012
Welcome back to the land of the living! Glad to see the update!
So, we have Yellow under Red's tutelage, a (not-so-) friendly Tyranitar giving Red a cool weapon and a sneak peek into the future! But wait, if the 13 people are who I think they are, Red is seeing an extra person. Or is Red seeing a future of him encountering his future self by traveling to a future?

My brain hurts.

Looking forward to more!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 10/18/2012
I love this fanfic. I am a big Final Fantasy fan and Pokemon fan too. So this one is just the fanfic for me to read XD. I am so curious how hte story will go. Why did Lance and Sird attacked Red's hometown and who were those people that were keeping Yellow captive? Where does Yellow come from actually? This chapter reminds me of Sephiroth and Cloud, only that Cloud had it way worse than Red.I hope you'll update this story soon it's so good :3.
Daownlyone chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
pokemon maplestory and final fantasy mixed together equals total epicness :D! And commonershipping FTW
Inside Out Musica chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
Look at me, first review of the new year! Feel special. (Actually, don't. I'm not that special of a person. xD)

Ooh, mystery man... I don't know why, but I get an image that kinda looks like Lance. I guess I'm weird like that...

Another fine job! It may be short, but hey, it's an update! Much better than how I've been faring with my writing... but no time to dwell on my failures. Wonderful work!
TopazSunshine chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
Well duh. It looks like ponytails to me, or some other weird hairstyle which undeniably looks good on a baddie. This chapter is a little short, but still good. I can see a hint of romance blooming. Nice! I'm glad you didn't rush the romance straightaway, but chose to let it grow gradually. Fantastic work.
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