Reviews for Chronicles
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 6/29/2014
Yaay Green appeared and Professor Oak and Misty are probably the other two persons.

What to do without an iPod I also write now most of my stories on my iPod. It feels... easier. I can write wherever I am and I can check the grammar and spelling later.

Why did Green and Misty attack them? And how did Oak now? He probably knows Red. Did something happen that made those two hostile?

I'll be waiting patiently for more.
StarShine65 chapter 8 . 6/29/2014
Yay you updated! I love this story! Hope you update soon!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 6/29/2014
Aother chapter missed, at least I can catch up with it. Thanks for explaining that

You do know that Vee is actually a male?

I still enjoyed the chapter and I'm very curious about Yellow's dream, so... Yellow met Lance before? How? And how exactly did she end up in that place? For how long has she been there? Her parents were killed by an Electross? More and more questions.
rissaye chapter 8 . 6/29/2014
Aha, you've ignited my love for the Pokemon series once more. Good job on the writing. -waits for Gold to come out-
Fenn chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
…Interesting...I have a slight idea on the classes of the other Dexholders. (Excluding Wally)

Green - Hmmmmm...warrior.
Blue - Ummm...I dunno..possibly a pirate or a thief...maybe resembling the Angelic Buster class?
Gold - I'd imagine he'd wield a pole arm or something.
Silver - Thief...maybe Dual Blade...or Xenon...
Crystal - Hmmm...toughie...I honestly don't know...
Ruby - Oh, ummmm...Magician probably...he would use the flashiest skills...
Sapphire - Wild Hunter.
Emerald - Mechanic. Period.
Diamond - Warrior...he would most likely carry a heavy shield to protect Platinum.
Platinum - Ummmm...I imagine her to be a summoner...

Anyways this is just my opinion. Not sure what you have in mind.

Fenn the Fennekin signing out!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 12/20/2013
Yaaay you finally updated this story again! So they're finally going on a journey. I'm really curious whay Poli meant with the event surrounding Red's dad. Did something happened to him, like with Tida's dad in FFX? (I got too used with his Japanese name, so i use Tida instead of Tidus)

And I ask again, does magic exist in Red's world, because I wouldn't be surprised if Yellow turns out to be a healer class.
The defender of pokespe chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
OMG OMG OMG PEARL PEARL PEARL I WANNA SEE WHAT YOURE GONNA DO WITH PEARLY PFFFFFTTTRR I SWEAR YOURE SO DEAD FROM HERE ON, IM SO GONNA READ ALLLLLLL YOUR FICS AND SPAN YOU WITH REVEIWS AN STUFF XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I hope you did well with Pearl... I am in love with da dude... *prays hard*
Dia Newman chapter 5 . 7/13/2013
WHAT THE BLOODY- PLEASE UPDATE!
yellowseason chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Ending wasn't sloppy at all! So far, it's a nice story with Red and Yellow, and I can't wait to see when the other Dexholders come into play (which I'm assuming after reading the story's flavor text). The action scenes are so vividly written, I can practically see and hear them.
yellowseason chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Whoa...from the first chapter, I wasn't expecting such a transition to a high-tech, futuristic, almost sci-fi environment, but this really sets a feel that anything can happen in this story. Nice! And Yellow! How could you possibly think such ill thoughts about yourself?
yellowseason chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Hey! Well, I think I gotta start off by saying I found you through your sister Topaz, whom I must admit I am a huge fan of. And while I love her emotionally depressing style, I don't just look at the genre of the writing...if it's good, then it's good. And this is amazing! I love the amount of detail you put in! And I love Maplestory too! Is Red's hometown based on Perion? That's kinda the impression I got. Anyways...awesome beginning...so much potential with this story.
asdfghjkl chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
I like this story! Mind if you continue it? more updates?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
I can't believe I didn't noticed this chapter was up. Anyway I liked it, too bad for Red that his master died and that his hometown is in complete ruin. But at least he's still in one piece. I was quite surprised that Yellow fights with swords, I thought she'd use someone like a spear or a stave. Anyway too bad that it will take a while for the next chapter, but I'll be waiting patiently for it.
Oh and I wanted to know, do they also use magic in the story?
Mai Mai123 chapter 5 . 12/6/2012
LOVE IT! can't wait to read more!
riolupika33 chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
What a great story.
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