Reviews for close quietly
hanging in there chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
you are skilled at saying much by saying little very nuanced, subtle, and descriptive

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Dimwit Cynic chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
This was really good! Completely lovely - abstract yet solid sort of plot development, the subtle ways they move into seemingly drastic relationship changes, general comprehension of the characters, simplistic but elegant use of language. All in all, bravo. :)
TSylvestrisA chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
This was well done. I'm sorry it's finished (even though it ended just where it needed to), and look forward to reading more of your work.
emma de los nardos chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
This really hits the mark with the tone, the suppressed emotions of both foolish men, the longing for each other's companionship and love. I enjoyed this thoroughly, especially the dialogue, and the ambiguity in certain scenes. Well done.
ForeverChasingDreams chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
very good :) horrible cliffhanger though . . . Please continue!
Catindahat chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
This is great, can't wait to read more.