Reviews for The Next Logical Step
Kerjen chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Beautiful and that last stanza of Tick Tock... oh my...
Namei chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
The the continuation of the rhymes and the emotions in this fic were quite fabulous! Thank you for sharing.
Wilhelmena chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Like all the songs in this story and it works nicely too.

Good job!
SuddenPsychosis chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Aww. How sweet.

This idea was a brilliant. Well written.
madis hartte chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Brilliant. Headcanon!
connielea chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Wonderful! What a great way to picture them. You have the Doctor's voice and mannerisms down beautifully.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
this story I think is unique. Yes, the Doctor going to the Library, but doing it while he is still alive?
iHadtoTry chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Awww! I always want a happy ending for them! Good job!
NobodyAtAll chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
So. Good. I never thought about the Doctor going to River in the computer to have his first time with her, but I suppose that would make perfect sense, as she has been saved there for years at that point. Best not to keep her waiting any longer.

I think you wrote both of them extremely well. Enjoyed it very very much. :)
cjh4ever chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I'm not a fan of Dr Who fiction, but this may just have won me over. You caught the characters perfectly; I could hear Matt and Alex saying the words. I also loved the context - so fitting to have the two continuing to meet even though one of them is dead. Well done.
gidget89 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I LOVE the concept of this, and your use of the rhyme and the fact that he can visit her anytime. I just... oh god, everything about it. I love it all.
Laughy-Taffy the Grape chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
uzumaki misaki chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Wow that was really good! I've read some really good ones lately on how he saves her *from* the library but this is the first where he joins her in the library. Awesome tale!