Reviews for Isla Sorna:My Island Survival
ivanganev1992 chapter 1 . 6/29
I red the story , really nice one .
ivanganev1992 chapter 17 . 6/29
ch 16

And they got what they deserve from the Dilofosaurs/spitters . But I hope Joisach find and get better use of their equipment . If they provably didn't make it .
ivanganev1992 chapter 16 . 6/29
ch 15

To the thief's eggs ! I like your weapons , They would be important resurce but your action is wrong . In the best case better to drop the stolen eggs in the boat befour playing with the prethetours . And there is no playing especially with the carnivores , especially the raptors , but any carnivore fully understands the loss of their baby . So it might be grevious consequenses if you are cought for your dark greed if you didn't escape in time .
ivanganev1992 chapter 12 . 6/28
ch 11 page 12

Well that is disturbing . But maybe he could convince Tholest's pack to guard keep safe from other prethetours , because well this is the natural life .
Sorry Zephir . But maybe if some of them come in the mainland they should careful how mutch they eat without eating the leaves of whole forest and to let the forest to recover .

And when Josh should tell the translating device helping him to understand because the other way is few weeks of directly teaching him raptor language , or whatever language or will be a secret ?
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 6/28
ch 3

Josiah a dagger is as important as firearm , any close range weapon beside the long range weapons .
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 6/28
ch 1

A cases of gas grenades are great but a gun would increase even more the chances especially powerfull one like M16/a rifle/grenade launcher/bazooka/sniper/even authomaic or half authomatic weapon and dager . The longer is the blade the better .
Zodiark Zero chapter 7 . 6/24
Its a nice story.

But i have issues with it.
Firstly why do Raptors refer to humans as humans? and not something like 'meatskins' Their not that clever. Even if they heard the term originally, when the first ones were born, but this is post Film 3, they'd have died out. This would be another generation.
Secondly why is there a church on Isla Sorna? Hammond was a money grabber in the books, he wouldn't care.
Thirdly, these Raptors were born on Isla Sorna. Why would they refer to it as a tropical island? It's their world. They don't know any different.
Dustchu chapter 21 . 6/21/2013
Awesome story man. loved the first part! you did a very good job on it! :D onto the next part!
Dustchu chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
Dustchu chapter 19 . 6/21/2013
His friend is a a Ptarodactly? (Spelled that wrong.) cool, awesome work and nice job! :D
Dustchu chapter 18 . 6/21/2013
Bastards, all of them are thiefs! KICK THEIR ASSES! Great chapter and nice work.
Dustchu chapter 17 . 6/21/2013
I sense a bit of Deja vu and Oh shit they're screwed now. I hate Dilophosauruses! Sneaky little bastards! great chapter. and nice work.
Dustchu chapter 16 . 6/21/2013
Damn thief, asshole. good chapter and awesome work.
Dustchu chapter 15 . 6/21/2013
Man, that must be tough hearing that your a copy, but hey. look at Mewtwo though! He's awesome! like he said in the first movie. *Clears throat* "The circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant, it is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are." have that memorized and PROUD OF IT! Great chapter and awesome work. loved it! :D
Dustchu chapter 14 . 6/21/2013
I feel bad for Tyra believe it or not. good chapter and nice writing it, getting better and better!
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