Reviews for Over the Counter
2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Loving the food-porn. Hope she gets some salami soon and he gets to nibble her danish
disrae chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Loved this story! Found myself giggling aloud at your great descriptions of dealing with crazy customers! Thanks so much for a great story! I looked for the story you mention in your last A/N, but didn't see it?
beckysue999 chapter 4 . 5/31/2013
Love this Bella and her inner monologue. Sweet, snarky, and very, very funny.
PleasureofLife chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Hey I enjoyed this story...Bella's potty dance really cracked me up! Doesn't it suck that you always run into a hot guy when you have to be somewhere (in her case the bathroom lol)!
edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
Lots of butt action going on in this chapter! Really enjoyed it. I can jut imagine a pic on Pinterest or something with a couple facing away, matching flour hand prints on their tushes.

New guy? Very promising ;)
modernsafari chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Cute, fun random! Feel free to keep them coming in between writing the new story :)
twilly chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
I was so happy to see this update. I miss you Ovie ! I was also happy to see you pimp Push the Sun like a pro too, but sad when it wasn't on your profile yet :(. And flour hand prints on Edward's ass are all kinds of awesome. Get working on new dude. ;)
MizzSkull chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Story is so freaking cute
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I like your writing style alot
jmcfall chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Hahaha that was great lol thank you .:-)
Caiteexx chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
I was just thinking of this story yesterday! I just couldn't remember the title :)

Great chapter :) Am totally visualising this!
TheWritingFreak chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
I love it all! Bella's sarcastic monologue is hilarious!
edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
He can stick his salami in her buns ;) lol
I love the sandwich making thing! Thanks for the prequel. It was interesting to read just how miserable life was before Edward came along...
twilly chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
I loved it, Ovie.

"We are going to make sandwiches. Probably mostly in my head, but it's going to happen." was the best thing I read all day.
twilly chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
OMG You really saw two people macking in front of the fish tank? This was a super cute add on! Plus it got me to read Delieward, so bonus there!
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