Reviews for It's Not Over Yet
BoqBeak chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Why is Tobias crying? The doors to leave the bake house were opened. If he were not in a sad state of mind, he would not have killed Sweeney. If I saw someone kill someone else, I wouldn't wait in that room. I would get the police. Toby, how does he know about Johanna?
Hammsters chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Gasp! This is fantastic! You must continue! Please?
Lucy Todd chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Wow! Dramatic ending! Please update. I need more chapters...NOW!
XxfictionalbookcharacterxX chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Wow, this is good. I always wondered what happened to Toby and the rest. I think the only thing you would have to maybe fix was the end when Toby says, "No, you're kidding right?" and after that. It doesn't sound like it would fit in with the mood; it sounds too casual. But good job!
MissJuniorMinty chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Although this is an interesting take, in the stage version (not tim burtons) Toby is found surronded by bodies by the police who johanna and atony called. They take Toby to an insane asylum. Johanna and Antony run off to a ship and leave london. it is implied they live happily ever after. But i love your writing style! keep up the great work!~DFTBA~ your fellow author