Reviews for Searching For Peace
kantorkan chapter 17 . 5/29
Story is getting way too busy and majorly off track,have no idea where you are going with it.
kantorkan chapter 16 . 5/28
Not sure what you are doing with this story.
r99smith chapter 26 . 2/16
This was a very unique story. I enjoyed it very much
WhitlocksMuse chapter 1 . 1/4
I just finished this story that has somehow eluded me before and, WOW, what a journey reading it was. Your imagination is mindboggling, the twists and yurns truly unique.
Really, REALLY well done!,
My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 17 . 8/19/2014
I know this story is done but I just wanted to say I love it so far.
Ali chapter 26 . 5/30/2014
Hey this story was awesome! I'm currently reading your other one too which is great too! Keep it up! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cecelia.Lunette chapter 17 . 5/21/2014
I think that this is an awesome explanation and really unexpected too. I love it.
MiccaF chapter 26 . 5/12/2014
Fantastic! Awesome! Read it straight through :-)
warning67 chapter 26 . 3/4/2014
I absolutely loved it this story was amazing it made me cry I feel nothing entertaining is complete without either making you laugh really hard or cry it has to make you do one and this story made me do both and I never disliked Edward as much as I did in this story but still loved loved loved this story
kantorkan chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
I was hoping that wasn't the end of the Eddie will there be a party for Alice also?
kantorkan chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
I can't wait for him to get a hold of Emo Eddie's ass it's soon.
kantorkan chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I am confused how did she get all of these abilities and what is she going to do when she gets to Volterra?
tinkerbear10 chapter 26 . 11/9/2013
I love it and hope there is more like it
NatalieLynn chapter 26 . 9/24/2013
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story!
Phoenyx-Fyre-Writer chapter 26 . 9/19/2013

First of all I think your story is amazing. I have to admit when you first made Bella all powerful it kind of turned me off the story a little, but you provided a perfect explanation for her power. I absolutely love your writing style, I'm personally not keen on the whole shifting point of views all the time, but you actually really pull it off and it's not too distracting from the story. I thought Alice and Edward's fate was very fitting - both fates if I'm honest - and at the moment I'm not in an Edward and Alice hating mood, haha.

I liked the fact you slowly had Bella heal from her ordeal with Edward and that she couldn't even say that she loved Jasper to begin with. I liked the fact it was a slow build up to the sexual activity and that Bella didn't immediately just become over what happened and jumped into a sexual relationship with Jasper. To me it makes their relationship that much stronger and built on more than just fulfilling sexual desires - but that's just me.

I have to admit Amelia confused me a bit and I think you could have possibly done a better job with tidying up that loose end - but that's just a personal complaint.

Now Caius I absolutely love! You've really give him some personality beyond the snarky bastard we hear about in the books and see in the movie. The way you develop characters is definitely what kept me hooked into this story. I love his history and that he is the creator of all vampires. I have no idea where you came up with that, but I think it's brilliant!

I'm personally a huge fan of Jasper X Bella stories and this definitely rates as one of my favourites. I have very few Twilight stories in my favourites but this is definitely going in there as one.

Anyways, love your ending, I wish you'd do a sequel, or future-take of Bella and Jasper's child/children I think that would be awesome.

Happy writing.


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