|Reviews for A Time to Work, a Time to Mourn|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
OKAY! i edited my storey and reuploaded it i hope it's better then last time. :)
| xDiary-Of-Jane chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
loved the storey btw i read the review on mystorey i know my storey of william & him havin a student was bad i'm gonna edit it & upload a new 1i am sorry i was throwing a fit 2 my cousin on how it sux i SWER! i'm gonna edit it & reupload it. thank's 4 ur time.
william T spears
| yeah9fun chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Dude. Start accepting anonymous reviews, you'll get more that way. Also, great story so far, but the summary. And Introduce your characters name and appearance in the story (not like in the beginning have a character bio, but sorta insert it into the storyline) like maybe in the part when he's looking into the shop window, say something like "chartreuse eyes stared back at me from a pale face reflecting my inner dilemma" or something. Anyway, see you tomorrow, so far lookin great!