|Reviews for On Stalking|
| DazaiOsamu chapter 2 . 1/24
Cap is the captain of all sport teams hhhhhh
| Worth1 chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
this is weird.
this. is. weird. im not reading the next chap but good job ahhhhhh
| Kate.R12 chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
Absolutely adorable! So much squealing )
| SereneCalamity chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
Aw ! I absolutely loved this !
| Book girl fan chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
Normally slash isn't my thing, but this made me laugh a ridiculous number of times.
| fiesa chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
I think I haven't laughed this hard since forever! The first chapter already made me drop down laughing, and the second was every bit as brilliant as the first one.
Your humor is amazing: a very enjoyable blend of different aspects. Your writing is very, very good, too, and the way you told this story - complete with perspective and style - was absolutely wonderful. My compliments - this one is a gem!
I loved how you inserted some of the Avengers, too :) I'm sure if Natasha and Clint ever visited the place, there would be even greater chaos. But even so, all the little things - Loki confusing Thor by sending him a slightly wrong weight for the hammer, Tony carrying around government-restricted weapons, Bruce turning green when angry, Steve humming The Star Spangled Banner - were absolutely fun to read. And Charles and Erik were very, very well characterized: I loved to read about them and their experiences regarding stalking! (By the way, the title was great, too!)
Professor Logan was a treat. I could imagine him, and it was incredible fun. He's probably one of these people I'd dislike instinctively when meeting them in person, or, at least at the beginning: but watching (reading) him deliver his lectures was just great!
Raven, too, despite her few appearances: I'm glad she had some!
And the little details. Professor X, metalbenders... I fear my neighbors now thing I'm crazy.
I didn't quite understand the scene at the end, I suspect it's a different version of Erik coming back to talk him into not leaving Charles (this time), but since it's not necessary he just leaves again. On the other hand, who's the /blondie/ he's talking about? I can't seem to think of someone. Oh well, it didn't matter too much.
All in all, this was a hilarious story and a beautiful read. Thank you so much for sharing it here!
(Not that you need the review, technically, looking at the sheer number of people who've reviewed so far, but anyway: here it is :) And you deserve each single one, too.)
| Fireball Massacre chapter 2 . 5/30/2016
it was hilarious! loved logan's character by the way. Nice work
| Penny chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
Gawd, this is hilarious. I couldn't stop smiling and giggling throughout the entire story and now my cheek muscles hurt, but it was well worth it. I love how you incorporated little elements from the original stories into this alternative setting. It was like a little easter egg hunt to go along with all the other good stuff. Such a fun story. And Erik's POV was brilliantly funny even though he wasn't trying to be funny. He was just being his stalker self, but that's what's so funny. Lol.
| bookworm737 chapter 2 . 7/14/2015
Please write a ton more of this! I love it and really needed to read something like this right now, so thank you :).
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/28/2015
THIS MUST GO ON OMF. YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
| Sue Clover chapter 2 . 3/23/2015
That was way too cute and silly and it made me way too happy even if it made no sense whatsoever.
| Hestia11 chapter 2 . 3/20/2015
I love this! It's adorable!
| the-thirteenth-doctors chapter 2 . 3/5/2015
Who the heck was the bench guy? Was it Loki?! Please continue, this is great! [*whispers* More Stony, please...]
| the-thirteenth-doctors chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
| GalaxyGirl181 chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
Was that LOKI?! It WAS wasnt it? Strip chess! OMFG So funny.