|Reviews for Allegiance|
| EchoEternaMisteri chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
I loved this a lot. And if you ever find time or inspiration to continue than that's great, if you don't it's okay. You do an amazing job!
I wanted to say, on Chapter 6, you said you are going through depression. I have been going through major depression for over 7 years and I got out of it just recently. So I want to share with you what helped me. Music, I listened to music that I could relate to and loved. I had help from friends. I spent my time with animals. I read and wrote my thoughts down on paper or typed them. I took on meditating. Meditating really helped and it's a lot of fun, you just feel so calm and relaxed and more. I hope you get out of depression soon if you haven't already.
| MitzvahRose chapter 6 . 4/23/2014
I can relate... Really, I can. I hope things are going better, and thank you for writing at least what you have so far for this story. :)
A pity you wont be continuing it, but I suppose that can't be helped... I dunno, maybe someday I might just have to take up your offer of letting someone continue this. :3
| Smaug The Terrible chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
_ this was the story
| rapono chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
I would love it if you did decide to continue it, but if not, that's ok. I loved it when it happened.
| sakiko of soleana chapter 7 . 12/27/2013
Awww thats a shame. Well my advice. Don't delete the story. Leave it here as a relic or something to look back upon as you grow as a writer. You might inspire someone else or you can give it to someone else. Either way. Don't delete it.
I hope you have success with your other works. Its been fun
| RaphaelplusMikey chapter 5 . 12/27/2013
*raises hand* Breaking Benjamin fan right here.
| sisterawesomeness chapter 7 . 12/27/2013
I respect whatever you decide to do with this story it is your baby. I hate to see it die so I hope some else takes it up, I would have no clue what do to and have a shit load of my own works to take care of. So keep on keepin' on my friend!
| imaginethat96 chapter 7 . 12/27/2013
Oh this breaks my heart, but you gotta do what you gotta do!
| Caeria chapter 7 . 12/27/2013
It's a shame you aren't coming back to this as it seems that lots of people enjoyed the story. However, it is your decision. I would suggest though that you update the story summary with a -DISCONTINUED- flag so that new readers stumbling onto the story don't get sucked six chapters into it only to then find the author's note that it won't be updated anymore.
| Star chapter 5 . 10/3/2013
I love this story, is there any chance of you continuing it?
| Artemis Crimson chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
My I do and stay strong I know from experience it is not easy to get out of such things but try being hopeful. Look to the stars and go forth and set the world on fire.
| darkblackandlight86 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
After reading this first chapter, I would have liked this to actually happen on TFP :)
But none the less, another amazing chapter. Everyone was in character and you added a little of understanding and charm, making this idea work. I love your fanfics and reading the rest of this fanfic right now.
| Redtailxclaw chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
I just could not stop going awwww when Starscream called the kids little trine
hope you feel better soon i love to read more story
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
Im bullied by a couple of idiots myself just try to ignore them it sometimes helps
| BreakItDwn chapter 6 . 4/29/2013
Great story! I always thought that, werr Starscream not in an environment where power meant everything, he would actually be a nice guy, or bot. You showcase that idea well and give it a humorous twist at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!
I do hope you feel better. I myself have been dealing with depression for nearly four years now. Ever since I turned twelve I've been dealing with one problem after the next with no way out. If you ever need to talk or get something off your chest, just send me a PM. Talking does help some.