Reviews for Udon War!
Skylark Starflower chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Dude, that must have been one expensive brush Hien had his sights set on. _
RenkonNairu chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
I know next to nothing about the Strider game series but your story's title sounded so cute I had to read it anyway.

This was a very amusing read and I thank you for it. As I said, I'm not familiar with the game its from, so I don't know the characters very well, but what I read was cute. My one complaint, however, is that this story is very dialogue heavy with very little narrative description to balance it out.

A bit more detail would be nice in the future.
Elizabeth8289 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
very nice