Reviews for Future Imperfect
Someone chapter 13 . 5/2/2013
Great chapter. Lots of comedy, loved the Asuka/Celeste interactions. In this chapter, I think You could write about interactions beetwen parents and children, Chifuyu and Laura disapeared in this chapter. You could write about parents giving some shopping "tips" to their children (like why Chifuyu "prefered" that Asuka wears track suits ? ). I am still disapointed that You dismissed Natasha Fairs (i can imagine a blond boy with a ranger hat like "chuck norris"), but You included Honne (Ichika was really that desperate?) which disapeared at the beggining of this story (Utsuho would be more of a character than her).
As for next pair, Usagi/Kazuma.
Update soon.
regent septimus chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Dude, I haven't laughed at any other story as much as I have with this one and I'm only three chapters in.
That "...Love transcends all?" line from last chapter was the best though.
I'm going to continue reading now, keep up the good work!
edboy4926 chapter 13 . 4/29/2013
Awesome and funny chapter
Vote for Kazuma and Usagi.
Uzamaki Clan chapter 13 . 4/28/2013
I freakin love the tension between Chifuyu and Ichika, and the "stop taking dads clothes off" from Asuka in the dresm is freakin hilarious.

Asuka seems to be the most canon child, followed by her weird little bro.
TheRazgrizDragon chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
Glad to see you back in action and this chapter didn't disappoint! Hope to see your next chapter soon!
GenryuBlack94 chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
Finally an update for this fanfic. for your offering i vote Sara and Saito.

Hope You Update Soon.
meganeshounen chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
Having Kazuma's (hunted runaway experiment) and Saito's (black sheep of a matriarchal family) backstories in the same chapter would probably generate enough sheer angst to power up Byakushiki Setsura into its Third Shift...

That being said, the current chapter is already leaning more on normal life hijinks so a plot chapter would give a good balance.

... Just a thought. If Ichika's going to participate in that experiment of Tabane's, I hope he wouldn't inadvertently get the combined memories of ALL his future selves as a side effect. (Counter Guardian? Faker? What's that?) The sheer information overload he would get after realizing he "remembers" doing "the deed" with 10 girls he's familiar with would crush his sanity.

Would be fun to watch though.
Oslight chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
Usagi's plot should be interesting...

Oh and that wouldn't happen to be reference to the TARDIS translation matrix would it?
RecklessBaka chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
I felt like a boss when I got all of Asuka's references, but I got a little sad at "neighbours club" reference. I just saw season 2 And the ending was complete pretty bad...

Anyways Celestel and Charles awe :D!
Reader chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
nice new chapter. for the next chapter i vote the pair of sara and saito.

i hope you can update ASAP but it is all up to you.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
Usagi and Kazuma please. Comedy and family is good, but the different lives Usagi and Kazuma led are more interesting. In Kazuma's case, it looks like Ichika is on the run and fighting a multitude of IS users. It'd be great if you could expand that plot sooner rather than later.
bakapervert chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
Thanks for the update. I'm very interested in Kazuma's past here.
Althero chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
Your the author so decide for yourself what the easiest choice.
Nice to see that you updated this fic.
Bet it was hard to write this chapter.
omegarulesall chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
Comedy all the way! Love this story, it made my day. looking forward to more.
FirestarterFLCL chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Hope you choose to keep writing this.
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