Reviews for While the Cat's Away
wandamarie chapter 1 . 7/11
loved it thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
as a parent of three the I'm 18 excuse doesn't fly people. Your not an adult until you are able to take care of yourself independently. Which means you have your own place, pay your own bills. As for dean well he can take care of his self but still lives with dad which means his rules! Usually don't agree with john at all when it comes to parenting. But on this one I would of done the same except for spanking sam cause he's way to old for a spanking. But I figure you just have some sort of spanking fetish like some of these girls have that whole incest fetish.
AlsoRecliningHorizontally chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
This was awesome - as usual :)

I liked the entire feel of it all. Sam getting a little action and getting wasted, Dean being a cool older brother and John being the strict but understanding dad.

Getting drunk and then trying to hide it from the parents makes me all nostalgic, thinking about my own teen years ;) I just didn't have a cool older brother to get in trouble with...

Very well written as all your work!

- Rikke
Phoenyx-Fyre-Writer chapter 1 . 9/26/2012

Here again. Like I said I've read all your stories and love every single one.

Anyway, this one I think is really funny. I love drunk Sammy. I'm a bit on the wall about whether this something Sammy would do, but that's just personal. I love than John grounded his 18 year old son, seems like something John would do just to shake things up and all.

I don't know if it was purposeful or not, but I think it's even funnier how in the other story, Sammy makes a mental note to become a Monk if girls ever make him crazy. Well a girl made him crazy... is he going to vow celibacy or just accept that Winchester's can't keep their heads around pretty girls.

As always, an amazing story and I'm off to review the next one!


wandamarie chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
wow it was a good one hay 14 licks with the belt was a good punishment for Sam and 2 weeks of grounded for Dean was when i was a kid i never got less then 5 and never more then 25 in less i mother off or ran great story thanks
bonanzabooks chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Great story. Still love your dialouge. I like the feel of familiarity in your stories and the family feel.
Twinchy chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
What an entertaining and interesting story.

You did a great job of characerizing the brothers and their relation in this one - and particularly the way the hirachy dynamics run in the Winchester family.

Your portrayal of John as the understanding but strict father was once again spot on, especially since I really liked his ideas of punishing his sons in this story. As Sam mentioned, very fitting for each of them.

The younger boy's try at drawing his father's attention and thereby the punishment on himself was not only heroic but also hilariously unhelpful for Dean. *snickers*

Truly a marvellous fanfic!
Cornish Rhapsody chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I can so see Sam losing his common sense like this when being faced with a pretty, willing girl. It was typical Sam trying to take the fall and get Dean out of trouble. Loved how John understood his children so well and knew which punishment would hit them the hardest. Fab story!
Flummox chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Nice to see you post a new story so quickly! It was good :)
Kat A. Fonell chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Loved it
FoxFire90 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Ah! Sammy was gettin' frisky! lol...I found that to be awesome for some strange reason.

Of course, another wonderful story from you :) Plain awesomness.

Waitin' for the next one!

memphis-heat123 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Wonderful story. I thought it was funny when Sam tried to blame Dean for the last half hour of his drinking since Dean was late. Yet he still tried to take the full blame with their Dad.
Lil Threat chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
That was nice! I liked how you made Sam's reaction to being belted so different from Dean's. And how Sam acted with the girl! That was cute, how she fell asleep in his lap... :-)

As Sam said, John does know how to punish them fittingly.

A great read; I'll be on the lookout for more of your stories!