Reviews for Hell or High Water
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
Every detail captured perfectly. Also, Half-life 2! Lots of little things I could praise about this, but I really just want to go read the next chapter!
GooBall chapter 42 . 2/25/2016
"F*cking cake!"

Good fanfic!

ArtofthePlate chapter 41 . 9/30/2015
This is definitely one of the top-tier Portal fics. The tension and character interactions all felt real, you made me laugh and cry, and the ending felt very satisfying.
I'm not familiar with the characters of Half-Life, but their presence was appreciated. My one question is: if Mossman was Chell's mom, what about the Easter-egg in the bring-your-daughter-to-work-day room hinting that Chell's dad was an Aperture employee?
I don't know if you've written a sequel, but in my head I'm imagining Gordon and the others finding Aperture and meeting Chell and Rattman and the bots.
I love this story.
ArtofthePlate chapter 26 . 9/29/2015
Well, the fact that he didn't even think about saving his own skin when the turrets hit him shows that he's already improving.
ArtofthePlate chapter 25 . 9/29/2015
Fact Core, yay!
Oh, GLaDOS and her one-track mind. She just doesn't get that Chell doesn't care about test protocol and qualifications.
By the way, in an earlier chapter GLaDOS referred to herself as "us" instead of "me." Is Caroline still there? Because up until then, I was lead to believe not.
ArtofthePlate chapter 22 . 9/29/2015
I had no idea Wheatley being dead could be so hilarious.
But he turned off the homing beacon. Will that mean problems?
ArtofthePlate chapter 20 . 9/29/2015
You made me tear up over the frikin' space core. And made me laugh again right after. You are truly a master of your craft.
ArtofthePlate chapter 18 . 9/29/2015
So much Greek Mythology. At this rate, I hope the Oracle Turret makes an appearance.
Speaking of turrets, will any defective black ones show up?
ArtofthePlate chapter 15 . 9/29/2015
She wanted to catch Chell at her best. It's not a victory if no effort was needed.
And GLaDOS gets a taste of what happens when people try to treat emotions as logical facts.
I find it interesting that she apparently felt pity for the Combine victims. Though denying it is completely in character. Will we find out how her initial reunion with Doug went?
ArtofthePlate chapter 12 . 9/29/2015
Yes! So much yes!

Okay. Calm.
Firstly, you nearly made me wake my roommates because I was laughing so hard. As soon as Rick said "it is on" I got a mental image of the two of them fighting... By rolling forward slowly until they hit each other and rolled away again... Well, I thought it was funny.
"His name was Rick." I see what you did there.
Secondly, I WAS RIGHT! Rattman, yay! I love stories where he and GLaDOS interact. And their discussion on avian parenting made me giggle.
ArtofthePlate chapter 8 . 9/29/2015
At this rate, I'd take Orion and his nerd-speak over Wheatley any day.
ArtofthePlate chapter 7 . 9/29/2015
I didn't know it was possible to love Space Core so much. You've turned him from a somewhat-sentient running gag into an actual character. He's so cute!
Oh boy, this is getting good. Can't wait to find out who the people talking are. I suspect that one is GLaDOS, and it would be cool if the other was Rattman.
ArtofthePlate chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
You got me with that first chapter. I had my suspicions, with the repeated quotes and everything, but as soon as Wheatley was unwrapped I went, "oh, it's going to be one of THOSE stories."
Boy, did you prove me wrong. In a good way.
So, you noticed that the song is everywhere too, huh? I've heard it from the Companion Cubes, from waking up after Wheatley flies into space, during the Space Phase menu track, and I think it's in the background of the song that plays over the Hard Light bridges, too, at a much lower pitch. I'm happy that someone besides me heard it!
Review chapter 41 . 7/6/2015

One of the top fanfics in general out there
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
My favorite portal fanfic. None of the character lines were OOC, especially GLaDOS, who succeeded to remain hilariously sarcastic yet changing. And beileve me, none of the other fanfics I read so far hardly accomplished this. I felt like I was reading Portal 3, really. I love there isn't any romantic pairing, but I really enjoyed interactions between Chell and Glados. God, she was super Tsundere that it amused me whenever she tried to care and protect Chell.
Also I really love your Orion, Rick, and other cores. (Srsly I need Orion in my life.) And Weatley was sincere, not betraying and quite less talkative which I was grateful since he sometimes talks too much:p Doug Rattman was also quite interesting to read. I love his conversations with his companion cube.
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