Reviews for The Mark of Athena
Mackenzie chapter 4 . 1/2
good but there are some misktakes.
huntresszoe77 chapter 10 . 8/18/2016
Also, don't listen to joybella. They seem like a real brat who can't see past the fact that in every fanfic, a different character will be the bad guy. In this one, that character happens to be Reyna. Plus, if she would bother to read this preview properly, she would learn that Reyna was being influenced by Gaia. Tying her behavior into the plot line like that was genius. Joybella seems like all the other flamers I've met (she's got me too, she's done A LOT of hating on me)- as soon as you make her favorite character the bad guy, even if it's to make the story exciting and to keep people guessing and to tie the whole plot together, they attack you. It's just how those people work. Jiper is a great ship and really cute. True, Reyna made sacrifices, but so did everyone else. Some bigger then others, I'll admit that. But still. The goddess of love said no demigod could heal Reyna's heart. Her and Jason never had a chance. So I say Jiper all the way, and down with the flamers- seriously, find a hobby or something.
huntresszoe77 chapter 11 . 8/18/2016
This was a great preview. I wish it had actually gone like this...though the Percabeth reunion in MoA was better, but hey, you can't beat Annabeth judo-flipping Percy. You just can't. I really liked this I'm actually an aspiring writer, and I've had A LOT of experience with haters ("too much fluff," "why is it all so clean," "why don't you write anything even slightly dirty," and so on), so just telling you- don't let them bring you down They're just people, same as us. So what if they don't like it? People like me and you were born to be awesome, not perfect. Just remember that. Don't ever give up writing. If you like it, go for it. You do you. Personally, I LOVED this preview. All the ships were there, Piper and Hazel's sisterhood was in place, and Percabeth gave me feels every single time. Satisfactory job- this is preview GOLD.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/8/2016
This is so sad
Leyna chapter 6 . 7/8/2016
Uh...No I'm sorry but you made Reyna so OCC or OOC (I can't remember) it's unreal.
ajkegv chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
this story is not bad.

p.s.
my name up above means something, only if you can figure it out.
awesomeness chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
awww... but your such a great writter
hufflepuffofathena chapter 11 . 6/13/2013
What? How did...did Festus die? Was it Octavian? Or just Romans? Can I adopt this story? Could you maybe carry on?
hufflepuffofathena chapter 7 . 6/13/2013
Sad. So much mixed up love. I don't even know what that means. So, I'll just shut up now, okay?
hufflepuffofathena chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
Oh. My. God! I LOVE IT! Where did you learn the words, like, 'reinstrated'? It is REALLY good. I would've liked it if Rick had written it like this! That's a compliment!
Anon chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
Awww! I loved this story! Even though I've read MoA I still want it to carry on :( btw, don't listen to any asshole who tells you to stop writing, you have a talent, use it. I wish I could write as well as you and I bet they can't write a fanfic that would make me stay up til midnight reading it just cos' it was so awesome! Keep writing xxx
I'm not going to put my name btw because I think people remember something's better when they don't have to worry about remembering a name x
Guest chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
Nooooo! Festus! Happy the Dragon!
TheWorldBookGirl chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
Oh, gods! Not Festus again! *sobs* I'm sorry about all this emotion, but I've got MoA feels. Lots of them. *sobs again*
MissMatchedEyes chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
dont nag at me for grammar cowie! im on my kindle. i thnk im your 100th reviewer sp YAY. MoA so Soon! remeber about tuesda xxx
burrlto chapter 7 . 9/23/2012
don't listen to the flamers cuz i love this story and i really hope that you continue it! i love the Jason/Piper/Reyna thing but it always pisses me off when the authors make Percy useless! Like, he has awesome water powers, why not use them? and i'm totally NOT dissing your story, but if I was Percy and my girlfriend (well, boyfriend in my case) was about to get killed by dogs, i would've used a water wall or something, not just sit there and yell... but i really do like your story.
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