Reviews for He Smiled
thelastwaterbender123 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
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JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Wow. This is beautiful. Both your writing, and the emotions you captured. I can see how a lot of unspoken things are said in this scene.

"An obvious stinging sensation enveloped his back, vague and almost pointless to him." I think obvious and vague is kind of contradictory.

I'm not sure what I think of all the things Aang wants to say. I think Aang's thoughts would be simpler, which is why he settles for smiling, because he can't articulate them.

Overall, though, I like this a lot. Keep writing!
PandaLily22 chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
AWWW SO SWEET! That scene always makes me sad! Total Fave!
Alexandrea1992 chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
That was short and sweet but beautifully written.
Evil.VS.Waffles chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
You know, Katara is always the one who saved Aang from a "sleep" (the last one bring him from the dead... XD), and she is always the first face he saw. Just one more reason to love Kataang. Anyway, this was awesome. I loved it so much I almost cried. Great job! I'm adding this to my favorites.