|Reviews for A Weekend in the City|
| SierraLarson chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Oh how I loved this, papa! I wanna see more of this! There isn't a lot of stories that are after she knows he's Saiyaman, but before the flying lessons. You best update soon. *-* And there best be some blushing in the next chapter! XD
| Razor V chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Wow, you've swept me up, now you HAVE to update :PPP But in general I liked the flow and context although it has been used, but you did a good job nonetheless. :DDDDDD
| Ri696q chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
This sounds really interesting so far. I love your style of writing.
| JessT xD chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Love the premise; can't wait for the next chapters!
| Son Goshen chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Nice, Orange! So this is the thing Mikey was waiting for? :P Write more soon!
| dbzfan777 chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
great starting,i'm look ford to see what happen next in this story
| Abdheib chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Very well written and seems like an original plot so I'll just subscribe here and now.!
| Dorkybunny chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I liked the first chapter a lot! Keep it up, you're a very good writer :)
| Joy's Canvas chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Aww, I really like your writing style. I didn't know you wrote so well. It was funny as well, even with me not being a Gohan/Videl fan! Keep it up! )
| Dr. Blue22 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I dont think they're are any stories during this time period. Mainly because Im pretty sure Gohan never went to school after she found out about him being saiyaman, and before the Tournament. Great story though, update soon!
| Kakarot Son chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I'm impressed Orange.
Just one thing. It didn't have much of a flow too it. The first bit was acceptable, but why not switch to Videl's point of view after Gohan runs out of the classroom?
The switches in the main character weren't smooth enough.
And it was just a little bit too fast paced. However the length does make up for that in my opinion.
Overall try getting a beta or slowing down the pace of this a bit.
One thing which I couldn't believe was that this has no mistakes, grammar wise. How are you not a well known author if you can write that efficiently?
Anyway I liked this a lot and I hope to see you continue it. Maybe a little revising too.