Reviews for 5 Centimetres Per Second
fandomb4friends chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
That was the most
norly m chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
I am a straight woman. But I got curious and read this. Your writing is beautiful. This is a lovely love story. If you continue to write beautiful storylines like this, I promise I will read them all. Actually, having seen Merlin on tv, it is not hard to imagine a merthur pairing. Colin and Bradley chemistry is great on screen, so I can understand the attraction and why there is soooo many merthur slash stories on fanfic. It is a natural pairing, I can see so. But your writing and storyline is really beautiful. Please write more. Bye and love from Malaysia
VioletRose136 chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
I loved this! Well done and beautifully written. :)
Mery chapter 4 . 4/2/2012
Okey, you've leaved me spechless again (I've just came from reading your 'For you' (I think that's the correct name of the fic) and needed to tell you how much I've enjoyed this).

In fact, I don't usually send reviews (but just because English is not my first nor second lenguage and I'm not good expressing myself in it) buuuut I had to tell you how f*cking good your writing skills are.

I 'feel' their love when you describe it, it's awesome.

I hope you never ever stop doing this because your stories (or storyes?) are really great and perfect and the best and 3

Thank you for writing this. chapter 4 . 3/31/2012

I adored that last chapter! The way you describe their emotions and interactions takes my breath away, usually I prefer more comedic writing but you may have just converted me :D!

Keep writing amazing stories like this one :)
chrollo chapter 4 . 3/10/2012
Oh my God. This is so sad and sweet. I love it!
P'tite-Yume chapter 4 . 2/2/2012
Wow... just... wow. What an I say ? Sorry if i didn't wrote reviews before but I was just... I felt the story litteraly, I was Merlin, I was Arthur and I felt all the emotion, even the smaller. Your fic captured me, thank you for that. Really.

Sorry for mistakes, I'm french :/
ArgentumUmbra chapter 4 . 1/30/2012
this is SOO sweet and so sad and i love it. definitely getting added to my favs.
kitsuneshadow47 chapter 4 . 1/15/2012
*GASPS* Oh my gosh, that was such a perfect ending. Beautifully done-it totally tugged at the very core of my heart. _

Now it's my turn to give you a warm, fluffy, descriptive (as much as I can XD) review. :)

Just like in your reviews, I love how you've incorporated your astonishingly vivid descriptions-no, LACED them so smoothly into your writing. After reading the whole thing, I was REALLY taken aback, and I could feel and SEE the tension between Arthur and Merlin as if they were really there in front of me. From what I remember from the beginning/previous chapters that I read a couple of months(ish) before, they were always being separated from one another, and I could feel that gaping hole of emptiness and pain in their hearts. Now it's so cute and heartwarming that they'll finally be together forever in each other's arms. Excellent love confession and reunion, I enjoyed reading your story so much-it was simply ADORABLE, I wanna like hug and turn it into sunshine and flowers of...wait-IT IS SUNSHINE AND FLOWERS AND RAINBOWS...OF MERTHUR. XDDDDD

*sighs* Phew...not nearly as long a review as I wanted to leave for you, did a marvellous job with your first story, my friend. I very much look forward to reading more from you-keep writing. :D


.::.*~Kit Shadow~*.::.
Magpie1600 chapter 4 . 1/15/2012
Love it.
Secretdork chapter 4 . 1/11/2012
I really don't know how to review this. Reviews can't give your story justice. It is so obvious by the style of your writing that you do not simply like the relationship between Arthur and Merlin. It is so clear that it is deeper then that. You live and breath their love, and if anyone needs proof of that, then reading this story is proof enough.

I am so glad that you wrote this. This is an inspiration to all writers out here. You truly are a master wordsmith. You create such beautiful poetry with such astonishing effects.

I can honestly say that this story is beautiful.

Now, write all those others you have swarming in your head. You've given us a taster of your skill, and we want MORE.

Beautifully written.

Forever yours, -SD xxxxxxxx
riveriver chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Let me say first up that I’m not quite the eloquent reviewer you are, so bear with me. I don’t think this will come out quite the way I actually want it to.

I don’t usually dabble in first person fiction, aside from the odd novel (clearly The Time Traveler’s Wife...), but never Merlin and yet I couldn’t turn away from this. The way you wrote their separation; Arthur’s anxiety over Merlin, then being parted from Merlin, and then when he’s on the delayed train, waiting to get to Merlin, to see him again after so long; their reunion, where Merlin waited, and brought him food, of all things, and then just their joy at being together again, only to rip them apart once more. And then you fit them together again, and it was so lovely.

Your imagery. Your way of describing them, and their love for each other. The angst, despair, wondering if their lives will ever be fulfilled. The romance. All of the reunions. Everything.

I can’t. Okay? I just can’t. I don’t know how you do these reviews. I’m so shit at them. I can’t get everything I want to say down. Not coherently, anyway.

The only thing I’d suggest, to be the brilliant critic you requested, is possibly for you to find a beta to work with, because then this would be exquisite.

I did warn you. I'm a shite reviewer. I tried. But you left me a babbling incoherent mess. It's your fault.

Bravo on finishing your first Merlin fic!
Silent-Ninja x chapter 4 . 1/7/2012

THANK YOU! You finished it! *does embarrassing victory dance*

I loved it so much, your writing style is AMAZING! *faints from your awesomeness*

I loved the ending, it was perfect :) please please keep writing, I want to read anything you have to offer :)

ok now i'm sounding a bit stalkerish... better go get my binoculars ;)

Ok i wont take up more of your awesomeness and general amazingness, and any other adjectives that occur to me, and will leave you with *screaming* ! :D

*falls flat on face*
allthingsmagical chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Oh my god. How amazing is this story? I will tell you how amazing...AMAZING BEYOND WORDS!

I love who you write their feelings, tehir thoughts, their pain, their pleasure, their relief at seeing each other again after all those years. When Arthur thpught that the man across the crossing reminding him of Merlin. I KNEW IT WAS!

And the same with Arthur. Where Merlin thought it was Arthur..his Prince. And it was and then he ran when the clearing was clear and straight into his loves arms, the arms he had yearned to be in for so long.

I loved all of this and it is definately one I could read again and again.

You are amazing. x
Silent-Ninja x chapter 3 . 12/7/2011

This is AMAZING! You have an awesome talent!

Chapter 1:

*Clicks on story* yeahh yeah the summary looks good lets have a look... ohmygosh WOW!

Chapter 2:


Chapter 3:

*tears rolling down face*

*faints with too much emotion*

*wakes up screaming like a fangirl*

Just thought you'd want to know my emotions throughout your story ;)

But on a serious not, this is AMAZINGG! (have I already said that...)

AAAaaannnnyyyway this is so good, please keep writing and thank you SO MUCH for making my day with your amazing story.

After my rant, I will take my leave while I still have my dignity...

*falls flat on face*
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