Reviews for A Little Closer To Home
Guest chapter 33 . 4/27
The story was good until last chapter, now is a piece of crap. Helping a rapist and killer was bad but make him something good is stupid. Year of crap cannot go away just because you love the moron. He deserve to dye as his father and godfather.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/11
Thank you for your hard work. I very much enjoyed this.
SeleneBoxer chapter 35 . 3/16
I just finished this-a fine yarn...very enjoyable.
tjmaxflip12 chapter 9 . 2/25
keep him in but not as headmaster
bookgirl113 chapter 31 . 12/1/2016
I don't hate you but DAMN IT I'm actually tearing up!
bookgirl113 chapter 30 . 12/1/2016
You killed Hagrid?! T.T
xNaruHina chapter 7 . 10/2/2016
Why do you keep ending the chapters so abruptly?
xNaruHina chapter 4 . 10/2/2016
Cliff hangers are boring as hell.
ThomasNealy chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
why did Dobby's speech morph so much. by the end he was speaking better then Harry!
Hurricane Potter 123 chapter 31 . 8/17/2016
Your evil!
Traveler301 chapter 35 . 8/1/2016
A very good story. It was a fun read.
Thank you,
Ron Pate
anjiepotter chapter 35 . 7/29/2016
you are successful in your story.
Bexy081116 chapter 35 . 7/19/2016
I really loves your story it was great and I'm kind of sad that it's finished.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/18/2016
A fairly decent story. Worth the read despite the mistakes.

Many, many, many grammatical errors (there, their, and they're, your and you're, and even were and we're). Lots of incorrect words used (like contempt instead of content). Some instances of missing words, or incomplete sentences (one example: "unlike the training that Snape")

There were even a few cases of not being able to understand what the author was trying to say due to a combination of these errors, even after reading the sentence several times.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/18/2016
That must have been a hard decision, but it was a war, and in war it's not just the bad guys who die.
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