I love it! That it was Mycroft behind everything was a perfect way to wrap this story up! Thank you so much for sharing.

"John believes he looks rather like a hobbit playing dress-up"

I C WHAT YOU DID THERE

Anyway, enjoyed this story I did! :) Perfect in time for halloween on Monday :)

I'm so pleased neither John nor Sherlock were harmed in the writing of this fic... though Mycroft will have a sore jaw for a few days :)

Well done! You really didn't let up on the suspence for one moment!

I think I can safely say you have got the hang of Sherlock fics:-)

Mrs P:-)

I totally did not see that coming. It was Mycroft all along! I wish I could see John hit him. Great story! Can't wait for more from you!

I like the general creepiness of it. It fits well for Halloween. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Even better than the first chapter! This is brilliant. Really loving this.

Very atmospheric! It feels just like a horror movie.

Poor Sherlock.

I don't like how the sniper just moved. It seems they've accounted, or even planned, that this could happen. Not to mention Sherlock: he must be frantic! I eagerly await part 3!

Oh my God, is Mycroft really the one behind all of this? If so, Sherlock is going to KILL him. If it's not Mycroft, I could also see Moriarty doing this just for the hell of it, because the Moriarty in the new show is definitely more crazy than the canon version.

That aside, I am definitely really enjoying this_ One thing I loved about series one was how John was portrayed, as the soldier he is, which you are definitely taking advantage of. You definitely have Sherlock down, too, with his quietly veiled panic and quick thinking.

Fantastic job, can't wait for the next chapter!

Really good can't wait for the next instalment!

Really good can't wait for the next instalment!

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Now that I have that off my chest... Loving the fic!