|Reviews for If I Am Lolita|
| Couture Girl chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Gamma, this is so terribly sad, you obviously didn't /describe/ it but well the reader obviously know what happened and just by how you wrote it, it gave me shivers and I just want to hug Narcissa and tell her that Cygnus will die! You made me hate him even more, Gamma. No redemption or anything good on him, I wish everything bad on him. The music box, was so eerily disturbing in a way. But it's good in the sense that this piece made it even more disturbing, and not a bit of fluff or happiness. And the addition of Gothic Lolita was wonderful, I liked how you managed some lyrics, into it, I had the song in my head while reading it and well now it's not only about Cassy but Cissy to *hugs them both* You really did great, in making this really depressing and getting Narcissa into character and showing us this side of her which she's a mess of nerves. *hugs her again*
| Didget chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
| Proud Blood-Traitor chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
As hauntingly beautiful as both 'Lolita' and 'Gothic Lolita'. Its not tasteless like some abuse stories I have read. I love how you have inserted lyrics of the song without the standard form of paragraph, lyric, paragraph. It makes the whole story a pleasure to read. No criticism can be given to this.
| OCDdegrassi chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
This was beautifully done. I can see this happening to Narcissa perfectly. I love these types of fics because I feel that they really do explain what happened to 'bad' characters in a realistic way. I've never heard of the song, but I do love that this story was used for Narcissa, who in my mind, always seemed numb and distant. I think Bellatrix would have noticed though, and it may have been nice for her to have issues because of it, especially since her dad didn't pick her. Anyway, beautifully written.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This was quite stunning... that's a difficult subject to make in an insightful way, but you got really well into Narcissa's mind here. Great job...
| Amazon Star chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I like your story very much,although it makes me sad!