|Reviews for All the Right Words|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
YOU MUST CONTINUE WRITING THIS! IT'S REALLY GOOD! DON'T STOP NOW!
| BroodingOne chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Great story so far, love the detail and plot thread.
Not too sure about the Marshall/Dash pairing there...
Shouldn't Dash be hitting on Syndi?
Hope to see you post some more!
| Hecuba chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Aw, this is fantastic! You got the voices of each character just right...I could totally hear Mars and Simon and Dash when I read it! This is so promising (and I looooooove the blossoming attraction between Mars and Dash, so cute 3) and I hope you add to it soon! I particularly love your eye for detail (like with Lost Things and How They Might Be Found Again by Herman G. Lodgepool IV - hilarious!), and the way you add to the Eerie mythos (with Simon's interest in magic because of wizened Ms. Clearwater). Can't wait to see where you go with this!