Reviews for Unexpected developments
nyx-p1e chapter 18 . 19h
Very enjoyable story, I hope we get to see Harry and his family taking over Hogwarts in future chapters! It would be pretty cool to see how they change the school :)

I've really liked some of the wonderful fluff you've written, Lucius and Harry are just so cute! And Maddox and Killian are brill names for such adorable babies as well :D Will Harry and Lucius end up with any more children? When will they bond? Looking forward to hopefully another sexy scene between the two of them at some point!

It's cool to see both sides of the twins family really coming together and getting on well - the flirting between Marcus and Bill is a great bit of humor! Looking forward to seeing where your next update goes :)
EVIL DOOR NOBE chapter 9 . 10/15
I love your story! who betas for you?
jgood27 chapter 18 . 10/16
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Pennieyoung chapter 18 . 10/12
Oh I love this story, really looking forward to the next chapter :):):)
Xyori Nadeshiko-Kumiko Taisho chapter 18 . 10/9
Oh wow magnific me encanta tu fic no estoy segura si he comentado antes, sino es asi aqui va. Este fic realmente me tuvo prendida estaba muy emocionada por las escenas. Asi que espero q actualices pronto.

Pdt: voy a releer second chances... Besos
angeleyes7084 chapter 10 . 9/30
love what I've read so far
sam chapter 18 . 9/28
Wooooo I came to find I hadissued 3 new chapters! Loving it. Can't wait till they take down dumbles!
lisa.francis.96780 chapter 18 . 9/25
adorable as with your other stories. I normally don't read wip but I loved your other stories so much I had to take a chance. I think your my new favorite ff author.
musme chapter 18 . 9/9
I love it
Coraline chapter 18 . 9/4
Love this stories, you by far my favourite author on fan fiction and I read most of your harry potter stories. Can't wait to see where you are going to take this story. My only wish is that the updates were more frequent. xxxxxx Keep up the good work :)
Stormshadow13 chapter 18 . 9/6
Lol, trying to picture Serius as a blonde... Yep, wrong.
cassiecutie chapter 18 . 9/5
This story was the cutest thing ever! Keep up the great writing. Do you have any stories you could recommend for me to read?
Shadow Eclipse chapter 18 . 9/4
love it
can't wait
Gracealma chapter 18 . 9/4
Great story and chapter!
victoria chapter 18 . 8/31
this fanfic is brilliant please update again soon.
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