|Reviews for Vegeta's demise|
| Asrae chapter 4 . 11/15/2011
Interesting start to this story. But it needs fleshed out. At the moment it's very rushed and the formatting is making it annoying to read. I like the idea though.
| FireStorm1991 chapter 3 . 11/15/2011
Haha, hard to picture a womanizer Goku, but okay XD
| Mordecai Hexagram chapter 2 . 11/2/2011
Big improvement on this chapter formatting wise! I like the idea of Bulma making weapons for the Saiyans too, I look to see how Kakkarot will tie into all of this.
| Mordecai Hexagram chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Not a bad start to a story. Definitely an interesting premise if you ask me. The only thing I would suggest you work on is more descriptions of the locations, like at the beginning specifically, it'd be great to know where the story is starting, and formatting. I felt as if the first paragraph was a bit too long and could use some breaks.
All in all, I definitely want to see where this story goes! Good job so far.