|Reviews for First & Last|
| Kira-chan Anime chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
No way, you can't delete it!
They have such great chemestry and I think you developed really well this one-shot. I liked everything about it, specially the last sentence.
Great job with this fic!
| milkteethbabydoll chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Oh please don't delete this! It's lovely. It actually reminds me of the first time I kissed someone when I was high... it's an amazing experience. The taste of someone's lips after a joint or a bong hit is intoxicating and addictive.
Love this. Maybe one day you'll write a continuation? Pretty please?
| YourRedRightAnkle chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Love love love. There is so few well written ATU fics, this is wonderful! Love to see more.
| A Vulcan's Kiss chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Delete it! Why would you, how could you even think to do that? This is absolutely brilliant please never ever ever delete this. If you've written better then this then your astounding if you ever write any more Jude/Max or any other stories please do post them. I'd love to read more by you, you could even make this into a short story where they become more then friends. It wouldn't have to be long maybe only 3 chapters. Or you could make it super long if you were to ever make this into a longer story I wouldn't care how long or short it was. I'd still love it , of course you can keep this a oneshot. I love it obviously and im just saying if you ever decide to make it longer ill read and love it. And also review of course :D