Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki, A Persona User
Hakuryukou79 chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
Hey Vanex! Great chapter keep up the good work! I want to ask if you are going give Elizabeth and Theodore roles that will involve in the story (like helping SEES and the Investigation Team to defeat a new enemy who is controlling the Shadows), when will Konoha finally come to Inaba, I just want to see them get their a**ses screwed they deserved it for betraying Naruto even though he say their ungrateful a**ses many times!

Anyway keep up the good work and I will look forward in seeing more of this story.
miner249er chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
good prologue
bankai777 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
i bet that naruto's former comrades are in for a big surprise when they go to where naruto is at and they can't use chakra at all.i hope that naruto never returns at all and he deserves to be happy that is something his parents minato and kushina would want him to be.
JackOfBladesX chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Interesting so far.

I normally don't like the whole..."The elemental villages are really in the real world but are hidden from them"-type of story...but I like i figure it's worth a read.
Kur0Kishi chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
character interaction between naruto and rise was sweet but it felt fake you know, suddenly talking about knowing her in the tofu shop. You might have wanted him to seem wise and stuff, but it came across like some cheesy soap opera.

That isn't really the only thing that felt fake, the defection seemed off, the reason really wasn't serious enough in my opinion to cause him to defect, make it more serious, like him finding out tsunade and Jiraiya were his godparents that neglected him, thus didn't want to tell him about his parents because of fear and that they didn't want to give him his inheritance cos she wanted it used to fund the war. if it were he would've started wearing a hockey mask and using chain saws years ago then again, writers license so whatever eh buddy? Lol.

the rest of th gang knowing about konoha and etc also feels like a half assed plot device. Its an interesting story and even better, the good grammar alone puts this fic miles ahead of the fodder that passes for crossover fics nowadays but I just cannot connect with the non realistic setting.
Vandenbz chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
Interesting way for Naruto to end up with SEES. Not surprising that the other Kage would not react well to what has happened to Naruto. Definitely looking forward to the reunion between Naruto and SEES as well as the two groups becoming familiar with each other. Next chapter is bound to be full of meetings for Naruto with the other characters from Persona 4, particularly the other Social Link people. Keep up the great work!
empireatwar1 chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
good chapter.
raw666 chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
Wow, they reacted that badly when they find out Naruto went missing, I wonder how they take when they find out he has been gone for a month.
Haseo55 chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
wow nice gift here,i was really caught by surpise, hahahahaha i liked the way you did the kage summit the only thing that im confused is how Naruto know about Kushina and Mito since in canon he learned after trying to control its chakra but you said minato predicted it, to tell you the truth im actually looking foward to the investigation team and sees meet kushina and Minato.

Also i have been working on my third chapter for my version but i cant make the last part work since i was planning to have a Lemon in a romantic way for Naruto and Rise but any way i do it it just look like porn.

well great chapter and again thanks for taking the challange
kazal15 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
It seems a little rushed, but I'm definitely interested.
empireatwar1 chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
Good chapter.
empireatwar1 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
good chapter.
Vandenbz chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
Nice first meeting between Naruto and Rise, the comparison between Konohamaru and Rise was a good touch. I also enjoyed the reactions of the other Persona users from Naruto and Rise's prank. Funny how Teddie is the only one without a date. Quite the surprise to see Minato and Minako appear, looking forward to the next chapter!
xxAkuxx chapter 2 . 11/1/2011
holy shit! More, I want more! Cmon, the last part got me!
Haseo55 chapter 2 . 10/31/2011
Man, not the cliff-hanger jutsu man you are evil, nice update though, i wish the chapter was longer but still i really enjoyed it, godd luck with the next.
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