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A11YouN33d chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
im gonna add you but only because I sure your writing will improve and im gonna pray the chapters get longer
spoiledhalfbreed chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Hey hun you really need longer chapters and check your wording
phazonwarrior05 chapter 7 . 3/28/2012
good chapter but you still have the problem of short chapters, your idea of a death match i think that a wrestling federation would not accept that but there is a match that the wrestling company does not take responsabilities of what can happend to the contenders but i dont remember the name, btw i think that a better entrance song for osamu would be i came to play by downstait, keep going and dont give up.
Bigby the Big Bad Wolf chapter 6 . 3/9/2012
I've had enough of this.

Osamu: What?

I shoot Osamu's arm off. The creep screams in pain and agony as he holds where his arm once was.

"You jerk! You shot my arm off!"

"Shut up!" I shoot his leg off now, causing him to fall to the ground in pain. His screams of pain are even louder as I walk over to him. I pull a blade out of my pocket and slash him diagnolly across the face, scarring him.

"Evil must always be punished. If you ever go near Lum and her family again...I'll destroy what you pathetically call your manhood."
Monkey-D-Luffy31 chapter 6 . 2/9/2012
love the story but u shold make it a bit longer, but keep going
Unknown chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
doing pretty good so far just make it a bit longer