|Reviews for The Fallen Tactician|
| Aleaster chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Editing was a good decision. I read the original, and I've noticed several stylistic flaws that you've corrected. Good work!
| voltaire22 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Fun. The light vs dark balance storyline reminds me of Buffyverse and some of the Warcraft canon.
Out of curiosity, what happened to Ninian and Brammimond?
Will there be a correspondingly larger cast of OCs to supplement Mark against the reinforced forces of darkness?
| kenegi chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
Well it seem like mark is the narrator of the FE game, lol.
| kenegi chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Aw I wish that I saw this right after reading the other one, granted it was mention in the first chapter of the other story.
| TMNTurtwig chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
I liked this. I liked this a lot.
| jak3615 chapter 2 . 12/20/2011
there will be no more Chapter
| Quicksilver915 chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
Very interesting story, WhizkidHV!
I am very curious to see how it progresses. On one hand, Mark can right any wrongs he made the first time around on the journey, which definitely seems to be his intent. On the other hand, in his attempt to do things perfectly now knowing the future he may make bigger and worse mistakes that he had not foreseen...I don't know, it could go both ways!
Anyway, very interesting plot and I can't wait to see how it unravels.
| AquaticSilver chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
Finally a new chapter! I been waiting for the upload :)
| AquaticSilver chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Ohh...good story, it caught my interest!
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Well now...I've seen the ideas for this fic a couple times before-there are a few others which seem a bit similar to it in terms of concepts. Still, you seem to be blending those concepts, which is cool, and I suppose makes this posess its own brand of originality. So I think I can give you kudos for that. However, be careful that the stuff you write isn't *too* similar to the stuff others have written before. ;o
| Knightofzero chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Cool story never seen this plot before. Hope u update soon. Like to see a lynxmark or MarkxFiora