|Reviews for The Blood Alchemist|
| Liuid chapter 56 . 3/30
Ok, I know there's a sequel, but this is just honestly ridiculous, you have to agree. This is probably gonna happen in the sequel, but I'm just putting it out there. Can't ed and Al both just use their gates to get back Taylor? Like, they just sacrafice their gates, one for Taylor's soul and one for her body. Like, Ed sac'd his gate for Al's body originally. So 1 gate half a human. 2 gate 1 freaking Taylor
| DisgustedFan chapter 35 . 2/11
Taylor deserves to DIE alone & not missed! Getting mad at a friend for accidentally calling her fat? That's the most PATHETIC thing ever!
I was loving this story and Taylor herself so much, even the silly spider scene, but then she had to go ruin the fic in this chapter forever by being the most worthless piece of trash I have ever read about!
| BigEyesBigSmile chapter 1 . 2/8
Hello *in voice is Swedish guy from frozen* I am part of... *angry m&m voice* LET HUGHS FREAKEN LIVE ALREADY! ... it hurts watching or reading him die... so if you feel the same, please join the LET HUGHS FREAKEN LIVE ALREADY SOCIETY!
| sarahmchugs chapter 1 . 1/23
I'm a bit confused about the kiss the stone bit. If you were talking about the Blarney Stone(which I have kissed) then it isn't of a cliff. It is at the top of Blarney Castle and there are bars under it so you don't fall and die.
| Shahzeb chapter 5 . 12/28/2017
just saw the dates so this story was finished way before life hates me shame you are not updating that one it was a unique OC
| Shahzeb chapter 3 . 12/28/2017
haven't read much yet but the outline of the story is nice but the oc seems like a Mary Sue and Edward is acting too nice he a lot more brash I came here after reading your other story life hates me so this one is a little bland compared to that but probably it'll get better as I read anyways I was just giving some constructive criticism so thanks for the read
| WinterSerperior chapter 48 . 10/12/2017
I thought Roku said that Kimblee was the best friend he never had xD
| BaekhyunSamaa chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
It's good to read actually, you're good portraying Ed's reaction about love, jelaous, etc. But your OC's is too resemblance to Mary Sue, so I can't finish reading it. But it's still good fanfiction, to be honest. Thanks
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2017
I see a Mary Sue.
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/16/2017
I'm seeing a blurry image of a Mary Sue...
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2017
I smell a Mary Sue.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
Is prepping myself for a Mary Sue character.
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/10/2017
I frikin knew mustang would hit on her mom! As soon as they were in the same building my physic powers senced the probable future!
| infires303 chapter 10 . 5/9/2017
Scarface! I love that movie. And its the famous reference scarface uses
| CinnamonSwirlix chapter 29 . 4/17/2017
I'm just going to say, the Spanish is terrible XD It physically hurts me. It should be, "No hablo inglés. Yo no comprendo. Yo quiero Taco Bell. Sí. Edward es muy pequeño (or corto. corto means short). Hasta mañana." Of course, if you did it wrong for the comedic value, then completely disregard this and go on with your life XD