Reviews for The Return
mist reaper blue chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
If your still making storys or active please make another chapter this is interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Is this story up for adoption? Cause if it is then someone take it
SpringStars chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Update? ? ?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Make no limits to ash's pokemon's movesets and have latias be ash's love connection and have ash meet up with paul and Ritchie and reveal the murderer of ash's mother and also give ash a roserade
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Could you give ash a ursaring honchkrow electivire froslass blue and green gastrodon drapion ninjask shedinja and nidoqueen that would be cool
Bumblebee transformer lover chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Update please
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
Can't wait 4 the next chapters!
Zarathos' chain chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
Please continue this amazing story
P.B chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Please continue this story, I absolutely love it, and crave for more.
Jonathan chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
What happens next
Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
Hey Dude You Still Writing?
TheGhost129 chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
... More?
JLgods01 chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
can u please update it?
DUDESRGFISH8 chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
HUH WHY MAY?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
dude you need to finish this story it is to good to not be complete you are a good writer so please complete this story .
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