Reviews for The Return
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
Or Electivire Aerodactyl Bastiodon Gothitelle Ninetales or shiny Mandibuzz
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
What no Nidoqueen Hitmonlee and the rest of the Eevee family
Kirito4266 chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
Hey, im posting an oc so here goes

Name:Draco Knight

Apperance:longish black hair, kind of scrawny, dressed in black with a hoodie, deep brown eyes

Charizard(shiny):Blast burn, dragon pulse, earthquake, roost

Dragonite: Draco meteor, Dragon claw, roost, ice beam

Hydreigon: Dark pulse, dragon pulse, flamethrower, shadow ball

Umbreon(shiny): Shadow ball, faint attack, moonlight, toxic

Aerodactyl: ancient power, iron head, wing attack, dragon claw

Latias (just had to): mist ball, psychic, dragon pulse, recover

Hope this will get in the story, msg me if u jave questions or if you wont add latias, i'll put something else
mist reaper blue chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
If your still making storys or active please make another chapter this is interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Is this story up for adoption? Cause if it is then someone take it
SpringStars chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Update? ? ?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Make no limits to ash's pokemon's movesets and have latias be ash's love connection and have ash meet up with paul and Ritchie and reveal the murderer of ash's mother and also give ash a roserade
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Could you give ash a ursaring honchkrow electivire froslass blue and green gastrodon drapion ninjask shedinja and nidoqueen that would be cool
Ghoul99 chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Update please
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
Can't wait 4 the next chapters!
Zarathos' chain chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
Please continue this amazing story
P.B chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Please continue this story, I absolutely love it, and crave for more.
Jonathan chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
What happens next
Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
Hey Dude You Still Writing?
TheGhost129 chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
... More?
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