I'm surprised I am able to review these chapters, as I thought I already had done so.

A little sudden, but I'll take it.

Would have loved the gore. Not sure about Annalise, though.

So basically she turns into the queen of blades like kerrigan in starscraft

Please do more

This is one of the best xenomorph fanfics I ever read

Your story was beautifully crafted. I read it all the way through and enjoyed it greatly.

asfor your question at the end of the epilogue concerning a sequel with the female hybrid.

I CANNOT SAY YES PLEASE LOUD ENOUGH. I would LOVE to read it!

This just occurred to me. I have been readin some freaky crap lately and been enjoying it. This included. First Alien Fanfic I have read and probably one of my favorite fics now. Good job.

Still an amazing story I re-read the whole thing
I wish you would turn this into a series and publish it it would probbly influence many a motion picture film idea.

I do wish on your new site you would add more and write more chapters

Perhaps have predators come and attack the human colonies thinking there where no xenos then having the xenos come and help fight them off

I really love this piece so far. I started reading yesterday and I'm a slow reader. I'm also writing a similar fanfiction and this was pretty inspiring.

This was my first xenoxhuman and now I'm hooked. Please write another!

(Chapter 9) your story is you're own. It's really for you to decide on the proportions. What are the primary themes and what is more secondary or background (less emphasis).

(Chapter 5). Why are you apologizing? It's your story. Not everything is going to be sunshine and rainbows. In one of my stories, there is a torture scene (2nd half not yet posted) that is a bit twisted but I don't apologize.
Everything has got to eat, drink, fuck and sleep.

(Chapter 4). 'Clip' is not a valid term where pistols and automatic rifles are concerned. Such as the 'stripper clips' used in such bolt action rifles as Mosin Nagant. The clip is pressed into the top breech and fed into the rifle where they descend into the fixed magazine. Then the empty clip is removed.

This is amazing. The soldier and the new hybird daughter is good. The soldier should be strong as heck to beat xenos and predators asses alone. I truly want the predators back to kick as$. 10/10 Dread Baby