Bravo! Beautiful finish to great story. Is there a sequal in the works?

LP

I'd love to see how you could take this further. I've added this to my favorites. Love it! Please continue!

I've just finished reading your story. Please, please continue. You've done such a good job with these characters.

It's now 1.30 am and I've just finished reading your wonderful story... Please continue, you've weaved the characters together so well.

if this is then end or not i think it turned out to be a great story, it would be interesting to see how they handle going back to work together but i think if you were to end it here it will still be great :)

Lovely, lovely story. I really enjoyed all of it but particularly like how Miranda confesses her love first.

Will definitely read this story again.

Thanks.

This story is brilliant. Characterizations were spot on. Added to my favorite stories list.

OK, I read the whole piece... And I really liked it. I like Miranda's "problem" w/ Irv that you introduced. Good little twist, there. Wanting a piece of her action... nice. The only thing I could say I didn't like is that it left me wanting more.:)

I could have used more interaction w/ the twins. I think you really could have developed that line... Miranda vs ex... Yeah, you should definitely write more. If not w/ this particular world, enchant us w/ another.

And, might I add, sexual tension and the cumlination of that tension... very nice and HOT. Well done.

Wow. Just wow! I haven't read a dwp story that emotional and erotic in such a long time. I think you just rekindled my love for Mirandy.

Wonderful update. Very hot.

I am enjoying this story.

Thanks for the read.

Hey I'm lovin' your story. I also wanted to let you know yer not the only one makin' connections to Rent. Which I also Love along with DWP. But I saw DWP before Rent.

Loved this story. Your Miranda is perfect and I can't wait to read more :)

Such an amazing, fabulous story! I've have smiled, giggled, laughed, cried and everything in between in the past two hours while reading this story. Your description of Andrea's dream is amazing. I don't think I have ever read such a believable and accurate description of a dream before! Your description of every character is absolutely spot on. I love, love, love, LOVE it. If you feel like writing more, please do. It would make me more happy than I could ever write down in words. This has to be one of my most favourite stories so far!

i would like to read more

I really like this story, I'd love for it to continue if you feel like there's more to it, but any other story would be welcome. Very nice job :)