Reviews for The Fix |
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archie319 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011 What a wonderful chapter! The building arousal, the dream, the reality - well done! I hope you find the time to continue this story or perhaps write another! Thanks for sharing! |
kelevra2510 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011 I would love to read more on the relationship between Andy and Miranda. Work situations involving Emily, how Andy and the twins come together, and the Irv business. Everything sounds fun and greatly entertaining! Hope to be reading a whole lot more! Happy Christmas! |
4568435164 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011 Wow! What a wonderful, wonderful Christmas present! That was absolutely divine! You captured their connection perfectly. I absolutely loved it. I cannot wait to read more from you! :) |
hermin22 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011 Lovely chapter! |
lil-sis24 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011 That was just great! Amazing. I hope there will be more of this, you certainly could write some more ;) I like your writing style! Thanks for sharing! :) |
ldqts chapter 5 . 12/23/2011 so glad to see another chapter... this is amazing, i have no words lol |
SaintVic chapter 5 . 12/23/2011 Geezzzz! That was sexyy! Lord, I almost can't type I'm so worked up- that's hot. Wonderful how they got to come together and find they have the same feelings and such emotion. Wonderful! Thank you for this gift (so close to Xmas too) Thanks! |
jazwriter chapter 5 . 12/23/2011 Great job. I enjoyed this story thoroughly. Your portrayal of Miranda (im)patiently waiting for her divorce to finalize added a layer of complexity to the character I found very compelling. I also enjoyed Andy's very real struggle not to implode or attack Miranda due to her lust on the day Miranda was sitting too close, staring too much, and generally teasing Andy mercilessly. Good thing she more than made up for it the next morning. LOL Thanks for the wonderful, well-written story. |
marty powell chapter 5 . 12/23/2011 now that was a fantastic update! thanks bunches |
Alphawolf69 chapter 4 . 12/12/2011 Really enjoying this so far, I like the gradual build of the friendship/relationship between Miranda and Andy mixed with the solid storyline. Nice work. Looking forward to the next update. |
Althea Valentine chapter 4 . 11/28/2011 Absolutely loving this fic! I can't wait for the next instalment, I really cant! 33 |
Cissa-Lycoris-Black chapter 4 . 11/28/2011 I'm so loving this story.. Miranda and Andrea's interactions together are awesome and I would really like to see more soon! :) |
Cath chapter 4 . 11/27/2011 Oh my God! You have to continue this soon! I simply loved :) |
kelevra2510 chapter 4 . 11/27/2011 Really like the chemistry between Andy and Miranda. Hoping to read more soon. |
caradens chapter 4 . 11/27/2011 that was awesome nate needs a kick in the bollox and the twins dad well he needs just a good kick in the head a pleasure to read amazingly wonderful fantastic story eager for more thanks |