Reviews for Time Masters Apprentice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() already read this back in like 2017 when I was in 7th grade but I'm coming back now to reread it just for the nostalgia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, Skulky, but the frootloop is going to do something stupid, and it's going to have bad consequences for Danny/Timegear/Dan/Whatever-his-name-is-now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As soon as I read "BEWARE!" I cheered. I love the Box Ghost, he's hilarious! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Coincidence? I think not! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story, I like the premise and how Danny's character has changed. But how the others (especially Sam) doesn't figure out who he was is beyond me. He is so terrible at keeping it secret. Even beside the fact that he looks like Danny, he constantly drops little to big unintentional hints, but nobody figures it out until more than halfway through. That's my little pet peeve, but else cool story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is amazing! Please do a sequel for danny! pretty please xD great way to put details and perfect character development. I will start reading your other stories but dont forget time master apprentice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I greatly enjoyed this story, and honestly, my only complaint is that I hoped Danny would've learned some time powers from Clockwork. But it wasn't any big issue, it didn't take anything away from the story for me. I'm looking forward to seeing a sequel for this story, like you mentioned, where maybe Danny has learned these time powers and is settling into his new role as the Ghost King! Best of luck with everything in your life, whether it be work or love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story so far, but I feel like using the name Daniel will being attention if he looks anything like himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So nobody called the police yet? Jeez. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His parents are trash and it serves them right that they killed their son instead of just ending any random ghost. |