Reviews for Time Masters Apprentice |
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![]() ![]() 0-0 woah |
![]() ![]() The End. Spent 3 hrs reading. Killed my eyes. ... Oh shoot! WORK! |
![]() ![]() My name is Draco. Draco Malfoy. |
![]() ![]() Well wouldja look at that? |
![]() ![]() And all I care about is his Identity. WH YTHE FUYKJC ING HELL IS HE SPILLING ALL OF HIS SECRETS IN LESS THAN FIVE CHAPTERS!? |
![]() ![]() Why are you spilling your secret to LITERALLY EVERyONE!? |
![]() ![]() I'd like you to edit your work. Dammit I'm speaking formally. Darn you Gentleman Danny. |
![]() ![]() Grade Eleven? Woah, and here I was thinking that he was to be in Year 10. |
![]() ![]() Black. Black. Black. Emo much? |
![]() ![]() Looks like Danny's become an OP character. Whoopdie doo |
![]() ![]() Who the heck describes his own eyes whilst narrating? My dark navy blue eyes were staring blankly down at the ... etc etc etc. 0-0 |
![]() ![]() I'm not crying. Why am I not crying? |
![]() ![]() Well whaddya know? Danny here become that op cliched anime guy with different coloured eyes! |
![]() ![]() Daniel... Time. WOAH I WOULDN"T HAVE EVER GUESSED THAT! THAT"S SO UNIQUE! *cough* Yea well, the name's pretty generic but other than that, I see and smell a great fic. |
![]() ![]() DANGIT SKULKER YOU JINXED IT |